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Quick Read. ( Battle Verse )

Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 10:13 pm
by MesaR
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/trama ... t6422.html

just a quick four bar battle.

Homie You Like It " Doggie Style " Thats Why You Molested-Six-Dogs..
What The Fuck Are You.. Didnt Your Parents Know Was Protected-Sex-Was?.. ( ha.

. Know One Nows What Your Saying Like Lil Jon And That Mumbling-Crunk..
.. Fam Listen Up.. Ill Leave Ya " VISONS BLURY " Like A Old Stumbling-Drunk..

.. Mayne You Still The " Youngin In The Game " But Im Not Fussing-You-Older.
.. You No Im Quick To Blast These Guns Out Like A "RUSHIN"(Russain)-Soilder.

.. Ive Heard The Kid Shit Before. It Dont-Hit-Me.. You Know My Lines-Are-Witty..
.. He Has To Use Diffrent Colors For His Bars Why? To Make His Rhymes-Look-Pretty.


.. fourth bar.. he used diffrent color at his end rhymes of each bar.

yeah .

Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 1:03 am
by -TraMaTiK-
ehh for a quick lil battle this was cool..

Know One Nows What Your Saying Like Lil Jon And That Mumbling-Crunk..
.. Fam Listen Up.. Ill Leave Ya " VISONS BLURY " Like A Old Stumbling-Drunk..

lolll^ fav bar..haha..cool shit man.ur definetly gettin better wit this battlin shit..stay@it man 4 real ur gettin nice..peaCE

Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 11:31 am
by complexity
I like the bar tramatik quoted.

Not to shabby "four bars"

Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 3:16 pm
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
Koo` Little Verse ..
Umm .. i Thought it Coulda Been Better ..
it Seemed Like Sumptin` That Was Thrown Together ..
i Like Tha Bar That Tram Pointed Out Too ..