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Post by Viral »

my brain-spits some insane-hits to make ya brains-split left watered n ya body frame-less ur left aim-less co-exsist yet still get blamed-for-some-lame-hits can u explain-dis? skull shattered from tame-whips containin flame-tips its a shame-bitch im freestylin like i was speakin in spang-lish......transmitted thru sattelite my lyrics dont battle right im a spiritual acolyte wit a soul to slam factuals right...chemically react to dis track breakin ya back wit an attack from iraq slashin thru veins n smackin ya wack did i slip stabbin ya neck? n disconnect da record dat deez lyrics hit wit ferious bricks blowin stereos quick havin ya doin aerial flips extortin da serials plan wit a burial man havent even gotten serious yet im creatin miracles n a lyrical pit flippin rhyme flows till im hearin ya quit....

was gonna write a cypher...but wrote more instead so im postin it here...comments would b nice..ill return da favor
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niice shit man, and i happen to know it was a free lol, thats lyricism, peeeace
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Post by complexity »

yah, couldn't word it better myself, that was straight up dope
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SWEET COMMENTS!! THANKS GUYS!!!....no actually jst thanks to da 2...more comments would b nice
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wassup everyone
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Post by Viral »

if ur gonna post in someones written da least u can do is comment there piece...instead of spamming for no apperent reason
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