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Just did this...
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I don't hear vocals?

It's a beat, I've heard before.

Actually Kurse spit on it.
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complexity wrote:I don't hear vocals?

It's a beat, I've heard before.

Actually Kurse spit on it.


That must've been another Kurse...cause I'd never spit on a beat like this. lol

But ummm...yea...beat wasn't too bad. The Chello play was decent...but that "Hip Hop...Hip Hip Hop" was kinda of annoying and ruined the song.
Lyrics were so/so...better than the first drop I heard you put down a month ago...but there's still room for alot of improvement. On some parts you ride the beat ok...other parts you fall off. And thats the major problem is that you fall off. Be more energetic and put more feelin in it...ride the beat hard as you can!

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Post by drunken jesus »

micz did the beat i think
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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yeah micz did coz it has his dj tag in it
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