All In His Head
Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 4:32 am
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theres my link..this here is a another attempt and a story song..i expiermented with it in the past with depth and it got a positive respond it seems..so heres another lil story i made up but its just me no apperances..leave some feed & enjoy..
the rain beats down on the car,as he puts out his ciggarette
yawns,looks in the back seat and see's his kid is wet
presses the button on his door and the window goes up
from the back seat you here, 'hey dad you know what?'
'what billy?' these words hit strong and flood his brain
'lightning makes water glissen,i love the rain'
'thats nice billy,but now u need to sit back'
'daddy,i dropped my toy can u please get that?'
'DAMN IT BILLY,dont u see im drivin a damn car?'
Billy frowns and glances up at the moon-n-stars
thru all the rain,u hear leaves rustlin in the wind
on the streets u see dealers,billy thinks hustlin is a sin
meanwhile billy asks 'dad where are we headed?'
'do u ever listen 2 me billy,damn I already said it!'
'god damn dad all i ever tried to do was ask!'
'and besides,i hear mom say it,she does that'
'dont u dare bring ur mom into this,just STOP IT'
billy leans on the window and puts his hands in his pocket
a few seconds later billy see's a truck on the road
its on the wrong side,the dad screams 'WTF,GO!!'
as the dad is screamin billys stomach gets tight inside
his mind racin as he tries not to fight or cry
from the loud profanity,he's takin it light but why?
cuz billys dead already & says 'isnt it a nice night to die?'
the dad looks back with major confusion while cursin
Billy disappears,his soul was abused as a person
not knownin the truck is still comin the dad shouts
'please NO SIR MOVE,FUCK I GOTTA GET OUT!'
the doors lock and suddenly billy starts laughin
he says 'this is what u get since u killed me in the past-n'
'ur imaging me dad,cuz u killed me and mom years ago'
the car swerves off the road and the dads tears flow
what cause this ur askin?a brutal double homicide
billy says at the last moment 'u killed us,enjoy the ride'
if u dont understand ill explain the meaning behind the story..its fictional tho lol..leave some feed plz n thanks..PEaCe
theres my link..this here is a another attempt and a story song..i expiermented with it in the past with depth and it got a positive respond it seems..so heres another lil story i made up but its just me no apperances..leave some feed & enjoy..
the rain beats down on the car,as he puts out his ciggarette
yawns,looks in the back seat and see's his kid is wet
presses the button on his door and the window goes up
from the back seat you here, 'hey dad you know what?'
'what billy?' these words hit strong and flood his brain
'lightning makes water glissen,i love the rain'
'thats nice billy,but now u need to sit back'
'daddy,i dropped my toy can u please get that?'
'DAMN IT BILLY,dont u see im drivin a damn car?'
Billy frowns and glances up at the moon-n-stars
thru all the rain,u hear leaves rustlin in the wind
on the streets u see dealers,billy thinks hustlin is a sin
meanwhile billy asks 'dad where are we headed?'
'do u ever listen 2 me billy,damn I already said it!'
'god damn dad all i ever tried to do was ask!'
'and besides,i hear mom say it,she does that'
'dont u dare bring ur mom into this,just STOP IT'
billy leans on the window and puts his hands in his pocket
a few seconds later billy see's a truck on the road
its on the wrong side,the dad screams 'WTF,GO!!'
as the dad is screamin billys stomach gets tight inside
his mind racin as he tries not to fight or cry
from the loud profanity,he's takin it light but why?
cuz billys dead already & says 'isnt it a nice night to die?'
the dad looks back with major confusion while cursin
Billy disappears,his soul was abused as a person
not knownin the truck is still comin the dad shouts
'please NO SIR MOVE,FUCK I GOTTA GET OUT!'
the doors lock and suddenly billy starts laughin
he says 'this is what u get since u killed me in the past-n'
'ur imaging me dad,cuz u killed me and mom years ago'
the car swerves off the road and the dads tears flow
what cause this ur askin?a brutal double homicide
billy says at the last moment 'u killed us,enjoy the ride'
if u dont understand ill explain the meaning behind the story..its fictional tho lol..leave some feed plz n thanks..PEaCe