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Braggin Man

Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 12:22 pm
by Kurse
Who says that it's not polite to brag?

Who cares!?

The newest from my lab..."BRAGGIN MAN"

(the title kinda says it all)

Leave me feed. (though i won't hold my breath...lol)

Written By: R. Bueno
Beat Produced By: R. Bueno
Mixed By: R. Bueno
Recorded @ Dungeon Lab 21 in Lombard, IL

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**Feed is appreciated because this is actually being made into a music video this week which will be streamed from youtube & myspace. The video will be entered as a submission to the youtube/50 Cent music video contest where the beat & lyrics had to be produced from the same artist.

Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 2:04 pm
by 16 Micz
um, to tell u the truth, i didnt like it, you've used that flow several times too, at the end of your bars, you stretch the last word, to me personally isnt enjoyable, but i mean i definitely see where u were goin wit this, that 50 style beat and everythin, but lookin forward to the video, keep doin your thing

Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:36 am
by Momeijah
Ok, This Was Probably One Of My Favourite Tracks From u, it Was Structured Great And Keep That Voice if u Redo it.

For Advice Though id Say Just Use The Stretched Last Words On The Hook, And The Part Leading Upto The Hook Aswell if u Want, Keep ur Verses Sharp if u Know What i Mean. Because if u Stretch ur Words a Lot it's Gnna Throw The Listener Off a Bit, Fill Up The Beat as Much as u Can. Apart From That, The Delivery And Voice Were Great, Even Though You've Used a Similar Flow i Still Liked it. The Track Was Pretty Good Overall Though, There is Room For improvement So im Giving it a 7.

Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:36 am
by -TraMaTiK-
beat was kool,delivery was nice..n the stretchin the word thing...well when u go 2 do the video dont stretch em out as much but u cud still do it...prescense was felt..the song its self i liked..if u werent doing this for a contest id say tone the vocals down but thats all hopefully practiced n ish..but anyways Kurse,this was cool...hopefully it shows the other kats whats good in Chi town..good luck homie..

Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:56 am
by Prophet
The beat was hot, there wasn't anything I didn't like about this one. Though I will say I've heard better from you, but this was still cool.

Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 12:01 am
by Cee4
This track was OK. The lyrics were straight apart from the hook. I hated the hook. It was played out and i dont like the way you stretched the words out either. The beat was dope. Iv heard better from you but this was still a solid track. Id give it 7/10.

Good luck with the contest

Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 9:31 am
by Mephisto
your flow sounds fine, you kept it goin and sounded pretty good, but that beat ain't my style, just gets old fast. keep at it.