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ok 8 bars 48 hours from when u check

checkin in

ok i ain't waitin on him no more





DIS BATTLE IS GOIN BE JUST LIKE DEJA VU, ME BEATIN, DATS WAT IM GOIN DO//
MY PUNCHIS STICKIN LIKE GLUE, SMASHIN T.K.6, AND IS PICK UP CREW//

WHEN IM DONE WIT DIS VERSE, IMA MAKE U FUCKIN BLEED, U CAN'T MAKE ME LEAVE//
IM CUTTIN UP UR WORDS, SO BAD IT MAKES U GRIEVE//

U CHALLENGIN ME CUZ I TOOK 2 DAYS OFF?, I CAME BACK NOW, AND PULLIN UR LID OFF//
ILL MAKE UR ASS LEAN, LIKE U WAS SUM SMIRNOFF, U HATIN ON ME BITCH, DATS UR LOSE//

COMIN AT U WHILE MAKIN MY 9 BLOW, U WONT EVEN KNOW, DAT IT COMIN THREW UR CAR DOOR//
WIT ALL UR WAK ASS RAPPIN, U MESSIN MY HUSTLOW, AND DATS DA REASON U WONT BE MOVIN NO MO//

BLOW PATHS, RUN FAST, MAKIN DA FUN LAST, COME PAST, AND GET RIDE OF UR DUMBASS//
YEAH TALK, ACT TOUGH, BACK UP UR RAP TALK, ACT UP, LIL BLAYZE TEARIN DIS MATCH UP//

IM SPITTIN WORDS OF DEATH, U DON'T UNDERSTAND, I GOT UR FUCKIN LIFE, IN DA PALM OF MY HAND//
I COULD MAKE A TIGHT FIST, AND CRUMBLE UR SHIT, AND KILL UR WHOLE FAMILY, OR I COULD HIT UR PUNK ASS RIGHT WERE U STAND//

U DON'T HAVE TO BEG, IM GETTIN MY STACKS UP, I GUESS DAT MAKES ME RICH//
UR GIRLS BETWEEN MY LEGS, DOMIN ME UP, LIKE ITS LICKERISH//

GET UP OUT DIS BATTLE, I AINT GOIN TELL U AGIAN//
FUCK DAT SHIT MAN, SAY HELLO TO MY LIL FRIEND//

hes got 24 more hours and a personal warning from me

Lawgix wrote:hes got 24 more hours and a personal warning from me

OOOOOOOOOOH Scary Shit Man a Personal Warning!!! Lmao Sup Man?

fear at the name of MYSELF!!!! all shall kneel before me!!!!! lmao

sorry i went sum where for the weekend let me write sumtin give me sumtime

btw check

ayo dawg

the last time we met it was a flute,shit was rel weak,it was never meant to be//
should of gave ur momma tha boot,guess tha condom hada leak,thats why u look like me//

ill bust ur shoulda blade into million of pieces,and the chances of u livin well lets say no is the answer//
but u betta duck because as soon as my trigga releases imma turn ur lungs black like an cancer//

fuck that gun talk stop frontin,act as hard as you wants,but u a fake blood,Lil Blayze aka wanna-be Big P//
finding slobs is what im hunting,throw up them fake taunts,crips make it flood,fake praize on becomin an MC//

u sound like sum1 whos a dead beat,sum1 who will never make it big up in this game,but god bless your soul//
coz u accept ur career comin to a dead creep,its ya momma to blame,coz she didnt let u swollow her dick whole//

and dawg thats the mic you be using,can sum1 on here say incest,coz i mean after all he gave it his best//
but he always seems to be loosin,like hes possessed,wit P's curse to always wanna be cross dressed//

i looked at ur battles and ur structure is unorganized shit dont make any sense,thats not rel good bud//
if we put both our verses in water id show you that mine are real dense,itd float to the bottom kinda like a blood//

and thats the god honest truth,there aint no hating here coz when i speak its always fact its wat i do//
you wont sound good in the studio when i loose ya tooth,make a gap big enough its a beautiful veiw//

please do me and future MC's a favor and just start digging ur grave, ill be there to bury u in it in a bit//
i wanna get my money outta you coz right now u my bitch aka my slave,so after this battle please quit//

edit:
spelled a word wrong

i`v got to give this one to the kid

punches=kid
flow=kid
personals=kid

vote=kid

both of you showed improvement here but the kid edged all categorys

fav line from Blayze -DIS BATTLE IS GOIN BE JUST LIKE DEJA VU, ME BEATIN, DATS WAT IM GOIN DO//
MY PUNCHIS STICKIN LIKE GLUE, SMASHIN T.K.6, AND IS PICK UP CREW//

fav line from The Kid- the last time we meant it was a flute,shit was rel weak,it was never meant to be//
should of gave ur momma tha boot,guess tha condom hada leak,thats why u look like me//

last time we meant it was a flute? think you meant to say last time we met it was a fluke lol but anyway it was a decent opener. u need to work on your grammar man but you did enough to win

yeahhh cee4 thats wat i meant i wrote it last night when i was dead tired but yeah keep votin ppl

first thing ive seen from blayze so i dunno if hes getting better or not,
tk6, seems better than the last shit i saw from you, gettin a tiny bit better with your rhyme structure

you both still need alot of work

TK6 had a cat sweep, but barely

vote=tk6



btw lilblayze, one of youre lines is really lookin to me like a wackened down version of papoose on the touch it remix with busta:
"IN DA PALM OF MY HAND//
I COULD MAKE A TIGHT FIST, AND CRUMBLE UR SHIT"

^^ anyone else see a connection? maybe its just me

2-0 uppin

I think these 2 show no elevation..
Tk6 gets my vote on because he had better cats then the other guy..

3-0 K.O.

please update

i think i had sum elevation