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complexity: first verse
Daguy: second verse

I could..
say ya suck, but I just point and laugh, soak my joint in gas
so when I fire it up, my eyebrows get plucked, and my eyelids
is shut, and i go blind like Helen Keller, cuz my iris is fucked
fuck it, we are both dumb and deaf, hell I admire the slut
and fuck hearing aids, I promise I can already hear with aids
but I cant get in here with aids, how about the rear okay?
everyone wants to stay clear away, I got syphilis
its been a year today, my first outbreak was vicious
Im affixed with sluts, but guys dont worry I mix it up
I couldnt get by without being bi, thats why my dick is cut
Im the sickest fuck, my balls sweaty want to kiss my nuts
I keep calling sex operators but they wont pick it up
quick to bust, until I found a cyst while taking a piss
then it started aching n shit, and creating an itch
at this point I was dating a bitch, who used a knife
and tried to break it in bits, but it was to huge to slice
next thing you know she is using vice scripts
my dicks leaking blue n white shit, all I could do was ice it
went to the doctors, cuz my cock hurts and the dudes advice is
to remove the lube, now Im not the type to fight with
a senior citizen, so I crush up some vikatin n start sniffin
right in front of him, and try to rub it in (fuck it was lube)


"here we go again due ta boredom" wit a pen-in-hand,
like "dmx recording with a short attention-span"
im not black ive just got an offensive-tan
and an extensive-plan to steal all of your pension-plans
leave you in intensive-care with an accentric-stare
and intend-to-nair off all of your expensive-hair
i didnt pretend-to-care when i killed the crocodile hunter
to defend-a-bear i have a tendency
to be sick mentally and wont quit till they disconnect me
ill run up in in the american embassy and sip hennessy with no penalty
ill twist a gar n grind on chicks at bars til their hips are jarred
im sick with sars breathin into a surgical mask cuz the herpes left my lips with scars
brains on point like i been scarred with wisdom im armed with weapons
and ready to face armageddon but not before i
char a kitten n serve it up to foreign children
perform at carnivals and festivals showin youre only hot when your spittin on large testicles
youve just witnessed a dark spectacle that will arrest your cardiac through twistin your heart ventricals

this was fuckin sick... plex u had a nice verse and da guy u had a good verse as well... was fuckin siiiiiiick man

i give it an 8/10 good job guys hopefully u 2 can do some more collabs

peace

plex and all his bloody dick talk lol it made me laugh.
i laughed the most about the crocodile hunter.
good job you two.
and i think da guy has elevated alot

Nice.....Flow was On Point some Pretty Nice Multis


8/10 Man

Complexity I Really Dont Think Your Verse Was All That Good Man.
Rhino.. Hmm You Have A Couple Ok Bars, Nothing Great...

I Thought This Was Alright, Not the best from your standerd complexity.
Drop Another Collab I Wanna See Some More Elavation And A New Topic

Because This Drop didnt faze me much.. anyway peace!

thanks for the feedback but it was just suppose to be funny

uppin some feed peoples

i'll leave feedback when i'm home from work..

DANNNNM that was fire good job guys
9/10

Quickly, someone bring this thread to the hospital - 'cause this shit is SIIIICK... Seriously...

This was awesome. Complexity, your verse was on fire; the flow was so smooth, it rolled off my tongue as I read through it. But what did you mean at the end when you said "fuck it was lube"...?

Rhino, "disconnect me" doesn't fit comfortably with "tendency" and "mentally". As far as the rhyming syllables are concerned, it's a syllable short. And "accentric" is spelled with an e (eccentric). But those are the only things about which I can bitch. This was an awesome collaboration. I hope to see another by you two really soon. Very nice, great, smooth flow, a steady, elevated rhyme scheme, lots of funny stuff. It's posts like this that keep me coming back. Way to go, gentlemen.


But my interest in this piece only lasted until I got down to SequencE's reply. Now I'm so much more intrigued by why he thinks 'Plex's verse wasn't all that good. Why not...? How come he had a "couple ok bars, nothing great"...? SequencE, this didn't phase you much...? Did you read it backwards...? Are you sure you're in the right thread...? This was off the chain. SequencE's vote is a prime example of a hate vote. Stoops.

The cyst turned out to be lube.

Haha This Was Awesome, Sick Multis The Whole Way Through. Topic Was Pwnage, Good Drop For The internet For Sure. Both Flowed Nice as Hell Even With Each Other id Say And My Fav Lines Were;

I couldnt get by without being bi, thats why my dick is cut
Im the sickest fuck, my balls sweaty want to kiss my nuts
I keep calling sex operators but they wont pick it up
quick to bust, until I found a cyst while taking a piss
then it started aching n shit, and creating an itch
at this point I was dating a bitch, who used a knife
and tried to break it in bits, but it was to huge to slice

ill twist a gar n grind on chicks at bars til their hips are jarred
im sick with sars breathin into a surgical mask cuz the herpes left my lips with scars
brains on point like i been scarred with wisdom im armed with weapons
and ready to face armageddon but not before i
char a kitten n serve it up to foreign children
perform at carnivals and festivals showin youre only hot when your spittin on large testicles
youve just witnessed a dark spectacle that will arrest your cardiac through twistin your heart ventricals

That Whole Part Just Flowed ill^

wow great feed

glad everyone enjoyed it