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this is a sample of my verse for 16 micz beat i may change it but its pretty much this shit leave feed please

dude honestly not tryin to be mean, but do you think you sound good>??? by any means...?

cuz honestly you need to stop pausin like that, and try to speak a lil clearer... and yes only michael jackson can change colors. I mean its like tough be nice listenin to this.

well dude its a shitty mic and shit like dat and 16 mics like it so yeah i mean is it the best one uve heard from me so far?

i really cant believe that my voice isnt distorted coz this is my shitty desktop mic that picks up every little sound lol but yeah i get wt u sayin ill do that when i make the full version of it this is just a sample im redoin the verse and shit

comon ppl leave feed back

umm i listened for about 30 seconds....

and its 30 seconds of my life that i will

NEVER GET BACK

peace

dude having a shitty mic has no bearings on what you acutally write, and how you sing that onto a track.

Dude you gotta learn the basics, you just dont wake up one day and go make a song when you cant write decent lyrics to start out with you kno what i mean?.

and if you complain about having a shit mic. its not hard to get a better one.

making a big deal outta it all, my mic is shit quailty sucks. well save up and get new one.


About The Track.

i thought the first bar was decent.
Vocals Sound Shit, Becuz The Beat Is Louder Then u Are.
Small Elavation. Keep It Up.

a micz beat ruined... i feel like an indian watchin the white man litter on their land... *tear*<<< my cries are only from laughter...

get at me on msn... we'll have a talk as well

ight thanks for the feed

ight lawgix i will

best producer/mc duo since gangstarr

killin me DJ lol