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Im depressed-an-rejected, because my life is like a sophomore-lp
its less-than-expected, nobody will offer-to-help-me
Im destined-to-exit, took a shot at life without making an impact
Im taking-the-rest, intact, bullets straight-to-my-vest
in fact, im waiting-for-death, yet I always get my wind-back
my life is like heroin addicts, all I get is tears-n-slits
the question is wheres-my-fix, all eyes on me, and my embarrassments
the cameras-lite,yet my life is so bad even Ophah wouldn't cherish-it
its less-than-expected, nobody will offer-to-help-me
Im destined-to-exit, took a shot at life without making an impact
Im taking-the-rest, intact, bullets straight-to-my-vest
in fact, im waiting-for-death, yet I always get my wind-back
my life is like heroin addicts, all I get is tears-n-slits
the question is wheres-my-fix, all eyes on me, and my embarrassments
the cameras-lite,yet my life is so bad even Ophah wouldn't cherish-it
Last edited by complexity on Mon Jul 09, 2007 6:24 am, edited 1 time in total.
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