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a diss on this lil kid that thinks his hardcore sayin that he was gonna put out 120 bars about me but didnt do shit

yo man some of your beats are hot. shame you ruin them. i think you should memorize your rhymes cause it sounds like your reading them of the page. i also think your tryin to sound too hard on the mic. you should relax more, remember your a 15 year old you aint intimidating nobody.

why would somebody be scared of someone that sounds like Elmer Fudd?

yeah i should memorize than and elmer fudd eh thats real close to exactly wat i sound like man ur pretty smart there bud

That's one of Dub's beats. He'd kill himself if he heard this.

Only reason I know that it's his is cause I'm doin a real song to this currently.

I'ma have to show you rookies how it's done cause this shit was really painful to listen to.

"Get ur hood stomped...get ur ass chomped...
...get the fuck out...I'm ready for the spout!"

WHAT THE FUCK IS A SPOUT!?!?

No No No No No No...I know. I know what a spout is. But how do you get ready for a spout!? That doesn't make sense!

Sometimes I think you guys just throw out words to rhyme with other words. Even if it doesn't make sense...as long as it ryhmes you guys'll put it in there.

And what in Gods good name is "murder crime!?"

Murder itself is a crime. There isn't anything in existance that's similar to murder. So "murder crime" doesn't make any fuckin sense!!! See...and this is why education is so important. This goes to show that you need to be remotely intelligent to rap!

Oh yea...and why do you guys run a Random Record & whatever the other one is Voice tag at the end that says it's "your" production. You didn't produce this. You do know that all of Dub's beats are copywritten and if he finds out or hears you guys claiming that it's you production that he's gonna prosecute you to the fullest extent of the law for theft. He's owns the songs. You guys aren't very bright. Hope you guys either destroy this track or have a good lawyer.

Kurse wrote:That's one of Dub's beats. He'd kill himself if he heard this.

Only reason I know that it's his is cause I'm doin a real song to this currently.

I'ma have to show you rookies how it's done cause this shit was really painful to listen to.

"Get ur hood stomped...get ur ass chomped...
...get the fuck out...I'm ready for the spout!"

WHAT THE FUCK IS A SPOUT!?!?

No No No No No No...I know. I know what a spout is. But how do you get ready for a spout!? That doesn't make sense!

Sometimes I think you guys just throw out words to rhyme with other words. Even if it doesn't make sense...as long as it ryhmes you guys'll put it in there.

And what in Gods good name is "murder crime!?"

Murder itself is a crime. There isn't anything in existance that's similar to murder. So "murder crime" doesn't make any fuckin sense!!! See...and this is why education is so important. This goes to show that you need to be remotely intelligent to rap!

Oh yea...and why do you guys run a Random Record & whatever the other one is Voice tag at the end that says it's "your" production. You didn't produce this. You do know that all of Dub's beats are copywritten and if he finds out or hears you guys claiming that it's you production that he's gonna prosecute you to the fullest extent of the law for theft. He's owns the songs. You guys aren't very bright. Hope you guys either destroy this track or have a good lawyer.

first of all its "get ur hood stomped get ur ass chomped get the fuck out IM READY FOR THIS BOUT"
and the murder crime is saying sum kind of murder crime like u no 2nd degree 1st degree that shit and the production shit is saying that i produced that track like the vocals i aint sayin that i made the beat so yeahhh

but overall how was it for sum1 on my level?

T.K.6. wrote: first of all its "get ur hood stomped get ur ass chomped get the fuck out IM READY FOR THIS BOUT"
and the murder crime is saying sum kind of murder crime like u no 2nd degree 1st degree that shit and the production shit is saying that i produced that track like the vocals i aint sayin that i made the beat so yeahhh

but overall how was it for sum1 on my level?

Okay junior...lemme school you a lil bit since you seem to lack the education needed to even battle wits with me.

1. Thats what I heard when i listened to it. Why did I hear that? Because there's alot of mumbling goin on in the track. If whoever was rapping the part didn't sound like a handi-capped child with a dirty gym-sock in their mouth...then I might've understood it.
2. Yea...1st. Degree Murder...2nd Degree murder...etc, etc. There's a name for that particular crime.
it's called MURDER you ass clown! So again I say...the term "murder crime" is goin to sound absolutely rediculous to any normal non-retard out there that hears the song because it's not a real term!
and finally...
3. Production. That means created. And in the music industry...production is refering to the beat or the instrumental. When you write a letter to someone...do you tell them, "Hey...i produced a letter for you." No...you don't. Atleast not if you're not a jew you won't. When you write lyrics to a song...it's called "written" Pretty crazy huh!? Grab some artists CD book. When they talk about who made or wrote the song...the credits will read: "Vocals" or most likely "Written By" and have their name next to it.
Yea...don't try to match wits with me when it comes to the music industry because trust me...I've been doin this for a while and I do it well. I know what I'm talkin about.

Kurse wrote:Yea...don't try to match wits with me when it comes to the music industry because trust me...I've been doin this for a while and I do it well. I know what I'm talkin about.

when it comes down to it... and i'll take part for the harshness of my reply... but you just plain suck... u've heard my track with ghost? good... nothin special no... BUT i have something that you lack... FLOW!! ... first off... u need to work on that... BEFORE U EVEN START WRITING SENSABLE LYRICS... work on flow... mic presense is the key to making a great track... plus if you can ride the beat... which obviously u can't... then u'll have it down... learn on workin how to take breaths during bars in ur verse... u sound like ur tryin to immitate Lil Wayne... but Lil Wayne can ride a beat better than you and he couldn't ride a bike with training wheels... so u got alot of work to do... i suggest u get started on it... before u earn any type of respect on here... from anybody... so if u want respect... do what me and Kurse says to do... i'm sure Kurse or somebody on here with patients would give you pointers on how to better yourself audio-wise... cause u sayin "i'ma open up a studio"... man LOTS OF LUCK to ya tryin to sell that shit if it sounds like what we hear on a daily basis when u upload a track on IL

i understand what u guys are saying and but how can i get on flow thats one of the hardest things for me to do and i dont know how to ride it really good so if u have ne pointers let me no

Lawgix wrote:why would somebody be scared of someone that sounds like Elmer Fudd?

lmfao!!!

T.K.6. wrote:a diss on this lil kid that thinks his hardcore sayin that he was gonna put out 120 bars about me but didnt do shit

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T.K.6. wrote:i understand what u guys are saying and but how can i get on flow thats one of the hardest things for me to do and i dont know how to ride it really good so if u have ne pointers let me no

if u don't know what "flow" is... listen to a Kurse track, listen to a Viral track, shit even listen to 50 cent or eminem even! they've got flow... just listen to the songs and u'll notice the flow... and u have to work on flow or ur rappin career is shit...

i no wat u mean but i just cant find the right flow to tha beat coz doesnt every beat have a differnt flow?

no... not really... beats are made up of tempos... how fast or slow the beat goes... so to find how to say the words... in a flow form... do dry runs... listen to the beat over and over again and freestyle somethin or if u have shit wrote down... recite it over and over... do dry takes a shit load of em so u can master the flow down for the song... then try n record it... if its shit start over