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48 hours after both check ins
im checkin in

Yo LadySam where u at?

ellooo, sorry i havent forgotten i just dont wana check in and not have it done within 48 hrs. im slowwwww remember haha. ah fuck it ill just check in and have it by friday. its weds here so friday is 2 days.

cee4 i'd say by thursday go ahead n drop ur verse... that way ladysam will have enuff time to work on it... so this battle is postponed until FRIDAY<<< thats the deadline...

i dont really understand what your sayin Lawgix. But it sounds like your sayin my deadlines thursday while LadySams is Friday. The deadline for both of us is Friday and if she wants an extension she can ask for it. LadySam didn`t need to check in this afternoon if she wasn`t ready . Im busy aswell tommorrow so the deadline stands unless me or LadySam asks for an extension.

what i said is what i meant... both of ur deadlines are for friday

Lawgix wrote:cee4 i'd say by thursday go ahead n drop ur verse... that way ladysam will have enuff time to work on it... so this battle is postponed until FRIDAY<<< thats the deadline...

i think he means itll be your thursday my friday.

nnoooooo i mean both of urs friday...

lmao ok

battlin Cee4 thats an immposible mission, i could make Aussie jokes but iv got enough ammunition//
girls aint meant to rap you must be trippin, so bitch play your position and get back in the kitchen//

i seen your tag battle when you nearly got smashed, even Big P was killin you til Kurse saved your ass//
i checked in last week your response is not fast, bored out my mind it`s like listining to your podcasts//

i Kicked In Your Door *like Biggie Smalls home, caught you playin with your dick, moanin and groanin //
whores like you get buried in Y shaped coffins, cause everytime u lie on your back your legs are spread open//

it`s like betting ur life on the throw-of-a-dice, u can play ur best hand but you`ll be foldin tonight//
i already said girls shouldn`t be holdin-no-micz, now you got two black eyes** i done-told-you-twice//

u only get sympathy votes or a dude with a dog fetish, so i`ll throw you a bone so u can GO FETCH-BITCH//
using words as weapons aint none sharper than this, my tongues like a razor-WANNA FRENCH-KISS?//




*Kick In The Door- Biggie Smalls song
**Two Black Eyes-She has dark eyes in her old avatar

No Flipping

nice verse mate. couldnt be fucked but i did it goodluck ty bye.

cee4? never heard of the bloke, youll be seeing four like big p's vision when im done
omg you beat the 420 kid you must be unbeatable i think i better run

i cant even hit u with personals, ur as unidentified as your daddys name
lets play a lil game called, lets watch cee4 get crushed by a sweet little dame

take a picture of this battle its the closest you'll ever get to me
mesmerised by my avatar too bad its the most nudity ur ugly ass will ever see for free

cummon do what they all do tell me im ugly and lets begin with the aussie jokes
but this 'sheila' will endanger your fate and your reputations officially at stake mate

your the epitome of unintelligent i mean you did call me out
but please just remember a woman like me wont ever consider such a stout

Cool Battle.

Fav Bars From Cee4-

i seen your tag battle when you nearly got smashed, even Big P was killin you til Kurse saved your ass//
i checked in last week your response is not fast, bored out my mind it`s like listining to your podcasts//

it`s like betting ur life on the throw-of-a-dice, u can play ur best hand but you`ll be foldin tonight//
i already said girls shouldn`t be holdin-no-micz, now you got two black eyes** i done-told-you-twice//

u only get sympathy votes or a dude with a dog fetish, so i`ll throw you a bone so u can GO FETCH-BITCH//
using words as weapons aint none sharper than this, my tongues like a razor-WANNA FRENCH-KISS?//

Fav From LadySam-

i cant even hit u with personals, ur as unidentified as your daddys name
lets play a lil game called, lets watch cee4 get crushed by a sweet little dame

take a picture of this battle its the closest you'll ever get to me
mesmerised by my avatar too bad its the most nudity ur ugly ass will ever see for free


So Yeah, Cats.

Punches - Cee4
Personals - Cee4
Multis - Cee4

Ok it Wasnt That Much Of a Clean Sweep Because it Was Close, But Cee4 Was Just a Bit Better in Every Cat, a Lot More Polished And Battle Experience Showed.

Now The Negatives. Cee4 Don't Link The Words if They Aint Multis, i Think That Only Happened Once in This Battle But Just a Pointer So a Dumbass Reader Aint Get Confused, Shorten ur Bars, u Have a Good Structure So it Flows Well But if u Can Say The Same Thing in a Shorter Line it Shows ur Experience.

LadySam Avoid Lines Like 'u Can Never Get This Dame' Or 'ur Gnna Lose To This Dame' Or w/e Because ive Seen That From u Too Much And it's Already Boring. Structure ur Verse Better, By That i Mean Set Up ur Punches And Make The Punch a Little Longer Than The Setup, By Like 2 Syllables. Use More Multis BUT Only if They're a Part Of The Punch, Makes The Flow Sweet And The Punch Sound a Lot Better, Check My Battles (Not Recent Ones) if u Wnna See it Done Good.

Good Work.

cee4 hands down he came so much harder with every cat ladysams shit didnt seem to hit ne thing jsut a bunch of words

vote-cee4

punches- c4
personals=c4
flow-c4
creativit-c4

this was a decent battle, but it was a clean sweep by c4 his verse jus did az better job