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I thought that we
would walk in peace...
She fought with me...
Chalk would be
along the street
if love couldn't offer me
forgiveness within this debauchery.

These nights which evoked this;
denied, since we choked it...
We lied, hissed and broke shit...
I love you, I hate you,
these light switch emotions.

The weathered breeze upon us
can never leave Adonis;
blowing by us, knowing my lust
is severed, please be honest...
How can you say you love me but can never keep a promise...?

You brought down my walls, but then gave me this bubble...
Played me, it's humble
how when you brought down my world, I even gave you the rubble...
I broke my own heart just to save you the trouble.

this whole thing was fire..i liked it alot man...we shud do a collab sometime or somethin..but anyways i wud quote the whole thing lol but its seriously good..nice shit stay droppin

the multi definitely give it alot of power as well as outro's of each piece especially the last line..

probably the best poem i've read so far on illest

Thanks, gentlemen... Women always have a tendency to bring out the most emotion in a man...

this poem was ill dude... see i wish i could write poems like that lol... dude it was sick... felt the power and emotion good job homie!!

this poem was good...
i love how you ended it...
id give it a 8.5 or 9/10...

crazy shit there man it was hot

Nice, Im not too familiar with the Formats of Poetry. My Poems usually come out as Complex metaphorical Lyrics that could be layed down on a track. I like this, i look forward too ya next one.