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Harle: Pink
Complexity: White

i thought it might be hard to move on, every time we would fight n argue
through the storm, you have taken away my right to guard you, since i was born
i wanted a girl just like you, I never meant to spite n scar you, we were tight too
why would I let you strike my heart through, when it came to love I had a heart full
they say their is a thin line between love n hate, not true, unless we drew it
one moment we were cool, the next you gave two shits, about me like I was useless
I thought I was stupid, you'd have the best excuses, unless, I misconstrued it
my view is that its all my fault, and you knew this, but kept it from me, secluded, don't deny it
even though I told you to be quiet, I cant lie, I still want you back, its like, lets try it
I might cry but how can we survive this, bullshit...let me open up your eyelids
show you why we belong together, forever, why we are strong and better with each other
fuck it.. we are beyond each other, if that is true, why did I palm this honest letter


before i knew we were forever, but now im unsure i can love u anymore
grownin up in va, nights by the shore so in love breaking curfew past 4
but then it got to you makin me feel inadequate, just for the hell of it
i know ur full of shit call me a harlequin but im no fool when it comes to this
for that u have my ass to kiss but thats irrelevant, cus i'm not gonna through with this
gave you a manual to my heart but you still didn't know what to do with it
this fight its pointless like tobacco petitions,tired of making mistakes id rather make revisions

this love is like new days something ive never seen b4 and will see never again
i could lie and say it's okay to be my friend, but how can you befriend someone you
promised forever's end, in time our hearts will mend but i wont keep the same trend
we've hit a dead end. the apocalypse of us, why live a lie built on lust, cus truly
love is only built on trust. if you want to stay, ill go, i wont being a new tomorrow
and when i don't leave don't follow..i wont act like i'm not hurt though, we can
stop but still life goes and i wont change the decision i chose, if im not honest
with myself i cant be honest with you, even though it's ur dishonesty that split us in two
ur intellectual games i couldn't see through, your many sexual affairs with a 'select few'

just understand im tired of taking chances with these life changing circumstances
and moral threatening romances, no more dwelling on old times when u enhanced my
spirit with slow dances.
and stop claiming your manifestations, like you never gave into those temptations
our revelations are due to your pursuit of unlawful sensations. it coulda been
what you made it, but i'll no longer fake it so no i must break it and make u pay
for the love u have taken and your mistaken if you think my hearts not forsaken
i gave you my all, now i gotta take it back just as fast, gotta leave you in the past
as something that would never last, my bad but im through tellin you i was the best
thing you ever had.

i liked this alot. harlequin showed more emotion than plex, but i guess it was only ft plex.

fav line from plex:
...why would I let you strike my heart through, when it came to love I had a heart full
they say their is a thin line between love n hate, not true, unless we drew it



fav from sam:
ur hole last verse

u two did well together.

plexie add a link

very nice i like both of ur parts,nice combo

plex i like this whole little part VV

i thought it might be hard to move on, every time we would fight n argue
through the storm, you have taken away my right to guard you, since i was born
i wanted a girl just like you, I never meant to spite n scar you, we were tight too
why would I let you strike my heart through, when it came to love I had a heart full
they say their is a thin line between love n hate, not true, unless we drew it
one moment we were cool, the next you gave two shits, about me like I was useless
I thought I was stupid, you'd have the best excuses, unless, I misconstrued it
my view is that its all my fault, and you knew it, don't deny it
even though I told you to be quiet, I cant lie, I still want you back, its like, lets try it



harle i like urs the most u showed alot of ur emotions in ur part.

VV

this love is like new days something ive never seen b4 and will see never again
i could lie and say it's okay to be my friend, but how can you befriend someone you
promised forever's end, in time our hearts will mend but i wont keep the same trend
we've hit a dead end. the apocalypse of us, why live a lie built on lust, cus truly
love is only built on trust. if you want to stay, ill go, i wont being a new tomorrow
and when i don't leave don't follow..i wont act like i'm not hurt though, we can
stop but still life goes and i wont change the decision i chose, if im not honest
with myself i cant be honest with you, even though it's ur dishonesty that split us in two
ur intellectual games i couldn't see through, your many sexual affairs with a 'select few'



keep it up both of ya. 1

What the fuck. I thought, I already added a link.

Thanks for the feedback

Fav Lines From Complex -
i thought it might be hard to move on, every time we would fight n argue
through the storm, you have taken away my right to guard you, since i was born
i wanted a girl just like you, I never meant to spite n scar you, we were tight too
why would I let you strike my heart through, when it came to love I had a heart full

my view is that its all my fault, and you knew it, don't deny it
even though I told you to be quiet, I cant lie, I still want you back, its like, lets try it

Fav Lines From Harle -

gave you a manual to my heart but you still didn't know what to do with it

this love is like new days something ive never seen b4 and will see never again
i could lie and say it's okay to be my friend, but how can you befriend someone you
promised forever's end, in time our hearts will mend but i wont keep the same trend
we've hit a dead end. the apocalypse of us, why live a lie built on lust, cus truly
love is only built on trust. if you want to stay, ill go, i wont being a new tomorrow

i gave you my all, now i gotta take it back just as fast, gotta leave you in the past
as something that would never last, my bad but im through tellin you i was the best
thing you ever had.

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Both Were Creative And as u Can See Had a Load Of Quotables, u Both Got Points Across And Showed Emotion. Flow Was Kinda Nyeh at Some Parts But Overall it Was Dope, Keep it Up.

Wow ..
i`m Fuckin` impressed By Both ..

Plex U Had Hella Quotables ..
But This One Stood Out to Me Tha Most :

they say their is a thin line between love n hate, not true, unless we drew it

Tha Flow of ya Verse Was So Flawless ..
Tha Multies & Emotion Juss Brung it Up to another Level ..
Pure Sickness Kid ..

Harle ..
Wow .. Tha`s all i Can Say ..
ya Verse Was Juss That Nice ..
One Of ya BEST Pieces ..
i Felt Tha Feelings That U Were Bringin` in Tha Verse ..
alot Of Lines i Liked ..
These Were Tha Ones i Liked Tha Most :

this love is like new days something ive never seen b4 and will see never again
i could lie and say it's okay to be my friend, but how can you befriend someone you
promised forever's end,

but i'll no longer fake it so no i must break it and make u pay
for the love u have taken

Collabo Of Tha Year iMO ..
Nice Job ..