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Posted: **Fri Jun 08, 2007 10:21 pm**

This Girl Got Me Trapped In A Box, But I Dont Wanna Leave, ..
Her Head Rests On My Shoulder And Tha Tears On My Sleeve ..
I Quickly Brang This Girl Into My Arms, And Onto My Lips..
Moved Closer And Stared Kissin With My Hands On Her Hips..
Love Isnt Blind.. Because I See And Feel It Every Single Day..
I Got Fellings Of Her In My Arms, And Memories Of Her Walken Away..
Tha Way She Moves, Is Like A Dove, Flying High In Tha Sky...
Im Runnin Out Of Choices Do I Keep It Alive, Or Just Let It Die..
I Hope This Would All I Work, If She Knew Tha Way I Feel..
But Maybe This Girl From My " Dreams " Isnt For " Real " ..

Posted: **Fri Jun 08, 2007 10:26 pm**

Wooops..

put this in the wrong, place can someone put it in poem area thx.

Posted: **Fri Jun 08, 2007 10:31 pm**

this was ok not great but ok. i liked the first bar best.

Tha Way She Moves, Is Like A Dove, Flying High In Tha Sky...

this line i wasnt really feeling much.

the last line was alright
but keep dropping mate cya!

Posted: **Wed Jul 18, 2007 6:19 am**

eh shit was alright keep working at it fam

Posted: **Wed Jul 18, 2007 6:59 pm**

i posted this about 4 months ago.

Posted: **Thu Jul 19, 2007 12:05 pm**

08 Jun 2007 08:21 am thats when it was posted lol

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