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this is better than the other stuff ive heard from you, i didnt like the beat at first but it got better when the drums or w.e were added in. the lyrics were decent and i think u 'rode the beat' quite well. lets hear some more from JJ. =)

LadySam wrote:this is better than the other stuff ive heard from you, i didnt like the beat at first but it got better when the drums or w.e were added in. the lyrics were decent and i think u 'rode the beat' quite well. lets hear some more from JJ. =)

i'm suprised u haven't heard that beat ladysam... its Eminem Obie Trice and DMX - Go To Sleep

it wasn't bad... ya'll gotta ride with the beat the pauses got annoyin... but still probably one of the better tracks i've heard from ya... keep it up... peace!

it wasnt bad at all, and was acutlly alot better than i expected, the first verse was dope, flow was good, and your verse was straight but you kept pausing at the end of the bar and that doesnt keep it flowin smoothly or keep sthe attention..and whoever did the mixing did a horrible job, i didnt too much like it..but over pretty decent, keep it up.

i Just Listened Now, The Delivery From Both Of u is a Whole Lot Better Than Before, The Whole Presentation Has improved. Flow Was Better But Obv Still Could Use Some Touches in Places, Keep it Up.

16 Micz wrote:it wasnt bad at all, and was acutlly alot better than i expected, the first verse was dope, flow was good, and your verse was straight but you kept pausing at the end of the bar and that doesnt keep it flowin smoothly or keep sthe attention..and whoever did the mixing did a horrible job, i didnt too much like it..but over pretty decent, keep it up.

WDF Whuz Wrong Wid Da Mixin'?

danm the shits hot i wasnt expecting the flow to be as good as this its hot

good shit fam i though the whole thing was on point

shit was hot nice job

Your flow is great...
Lyrics are better...
Nice Piece...