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I love to hate you… I'd love to make you break you.
…but I need to save you.

You torture me; the enforcer, the only driving force in me, you course through me forcibly, keeping me alive.
Remorsefully, I scream with you inside, resourcefully, dreaming you would die.

You're so predictable. Everyone knows you, everyone knows what you're about. But no one knows who you truly are; the monster you really are inside. Inside me.

You're broken off into pieces. Potent, often to ease this onus; awful diseases, soaked in all of the reasons, open to all who would see this.

You're so unpredictable. No one knows you, no one knows what you're about. No one knows who you truly are; the monster you really are inside. Inside me.

You keep me going. Discreetly knowing pieces; growing. Screaming, throwing, breathing; showing.

You rape my consciousness. Great. Hate, obnoxiousness and a blatant obstinate faith convey the positives. Invade the bottomless, raving politics that display the hollow, misstated obvious. Escape is ominously vague; preposterous. The plague that prospers grips pain and fosters it; strains to father it. Don't bother, it's a waste to ponder this circus; its service urges hurt if you ever face the consequence.

i really like this peice... i take it u were conversating with ur inner self? multies were nice... i liked it i give it a 8/10

keep it up!

Thank you... Yes, this was a conversation with my inner self...

Wow!... this shit is sick, you have a dope style, i could see all these as really dope ass spoken-word or preformance poetry pieces... very sick, dope topics too, keep it up man your definitly one of my favorites haha

this is the best thing ive seen from you, im impressed buddy, good shit

Thanks, gentlemen... I appreciate the love... I'll try and post something else like this soon...

Thanks... I definitely appreciate the criticism... And while I agree the "inner struggle" pieces are kind of played out, I think everyone is compelled to write at least one...