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nothin spectacular really...just thought i'd record another track

as i fast foward my rhyme book to the last page
end my last phrase,and begin my last days

gladly gain respect in fast ways
thats brave but all you cowards wanna smash me

thats gay, unfortunately that plays
a role on society,and all of you fags will pay

so even til this day, until i reveal the plague
and these rhymes that make me feel this way

im still this black kid that u did betray
but anyway, we wont give that any play

cuz i cud sit and count enemies for twenty days
so today, i plan to prepare my soldiers to send away

i remember battlin, sittin at home for days waitin
as the heat intensed and my opponents stayed hatin

but i raised anxious, and i became famous
he became the lamest i became the blame, its

a damn shame to name him a mistake in the game we playin
but the games we playin all became violent

all the same lies were comin from all the same guys
its insane why did he blame my, talent and shame i

false claimed and framed, so i took the name and aimed high
not knowin i was fightin my brain inside

16 wanted to get cash, anything the world provided
micz kicked ass,,and then the names collided. 16 micz

this was good,the beat was hot,but ur flow was shitty gotta stop the mumblin too
but i give this a 7/10

heh, u add lil words that rn't shown in ur text.. the beat was koo.. lyrics r.. so-so i guess.. u were talking over the beat tho so it was kinda annoying lol...maybe if u raise the beat and lower ur voice both just a little bit it'll be ok.. sounded like u were too close to the mic

i just saw this. i liked the beat, i couldnt understand you much though and it was pretty monotoned.

lol I Hope To God You Come With Somethin Alot Hotter Then That For Our Battle, Your Flow Was Messed, Your Qaulity Was Wack, Your Lyrics Weren't That Great, OverAll It Wasn't That Good. I'd Give It A 4/10, But Practice Makes Perfect.. Well At Least That's What They Tell Me.

lol well i mean of course you'll think negative to it no matter wha but i agree, and this was only for fun..nothin serious, it was actually just practie..but unfortunately, these lyrcis r better than most of ur audio lyrics, and this was keystyled to the beat, and recorded, but thanks for the feed anyway, ill return the favor soon enough

You know this wasn't too bad and you keeping showing more potential.

Just take my advice DRINK REDBULLS MAN, you have no energy when your recording man.

When you pickup the mic, let that electricity take you over and just go crazy.

i can do alot better than this!

BigP wrote:i can do alot better than this!

Damn Micz...that sounds like a challenge fam! LOL
You just got called out B.

lmfao, ill take ur word for it

Kurse wrote:

BigP wrote:i can do alot better than this!

Damn Micz...that sounds like a challenge fam! LOL
You just got called out B.

Seriously and who could be the challenger? lol. naw i was just talking about how his mic sounds. his mic sounded terrible.

BigP wrote:

Kurse wrote:

BigP wrote:i can do alot better than this!

Damn Micz...that sounds like a challenge fam! LOL
You just got called out B.

Seriously and who could be the challenger? lol. naw i was just talking about how his mic sounds. his mic sounded terrible.

u don't sound any better... so stop actin like ur shit don't stink big p... ur still the most hated on IL

Lawgix wrote:

BigP wrote:

Kurse wrote:

Damn Micz...that sounds like a challenge fam! LOL
You just got called out B.

Seriously and who could be the challenger? lol. naw i was just talking about how his mic sounds. his mic sounded terrible.

u don't sound any better... so stop actin like ur shit don't stink big p... ur still the most hated on IL

im not, i meant that his mic is bad. my mis isent that bad...

i thought it was alright like ur mic is a dynamic isnt it coz im pretty sure ti is that could be why tha quality soudn shitty but the lyrics are pretty tight

Lyrics was tight..flow and mic messed it up tho..But big ups on doing the audio thing