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I Get On Tha Ground Move Foward And Slither-Like-Snakes..
Im Filled With Liters Of Fluids, Like Oceans Rivers-And-Lakes..
My Punches Are Hard, Falling Over Before U Can Get A Duck-In..
My Bars Are Pure Steel, Like The Ones Paris Hiltons Stuck-In ..
Dated so many chicks now they wish they didnt split-with-me..
No One Would Bump Your Cd, Even If That Shit-Was-Free..
Text Battles Are Hot But There No Way My Sctiptures-Are-Saine..
Rember MY Name!, Cuz Ill Be Here For Ever Like Pictures-In-Frames..
Shit, I Could End Your Carrer Right Now And Take Away Your MOUSE..
I Dont No Whats More Sad, You Or a Hobo Looking For A House ... ??
Raps All About Having A Go? No.. Im Taking Away The Fun-Time
Like Cocaine, I Can Snort Up Emces In Less Then ONE-LINE..

This piece was like intresting, it was extremly random and was all over the place. You were talking bout all kinds of shit that had nothing to do with eachother really in a very short verse lol. Decent multis and a decent vocabulary, Not sure what you were tryna write bout here or if you were just kinda doing whatever came to mind but good job on it and keep em coming

haha yeah it was just stuff that came to my head. didnt have a certain topic

Second bar was my favorite.

Not really much to say. You went from one topic to another in lines, which
is kinda annoying.