you serious?BigP wrote: aint tha type to let ya disrespect me//
ill stand up for myself, yall never wreck me//
that was incredibly elementary. Up your vocab ALOT, work on multis ALOT, work on subject matter ALOT [by that i mean, dont do such a played topic as 'dont disrespect me'] Work on line length, yours are really short. But you dont wanna make them to long. and WRITE ALOT. Practice doesnt make perfect, but it will defiantly help.