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Viral was to gay to collab with me, so i threw this together, see how i'm retired, ha

everytime i put a-track-in, i'm the biggest attraction//
when a-track-spins, and goes off a-traction//

Illest, I've always had-ya-gaspin, with the maddest-rapping//
every spit an abstraction for my satisfaction//

each rap has more action, nobodies matching//
your-laughing, but the flows like herpes its catching//

i serve cd's with scratching..knive across the top, no room for patching//
freestyle is my only passion...wont stop, even if it never brings the cash-in//

i'll be smashing, and bashing crews into rations//
blasting, and thrashing you into fashion//

ashen my beefs, don't care if your flashing a piece//
I'll be slashing ya niece, trashing beliefs//

crashing-police, into back-seats//
lashing on beats, to these wack-streets//

i don't pack-heat, like florida//
but the track-reach, the quarter//

think you're equal to me you'll get a court order!!//
i'll push ya down the hill on this forum, like a snow boarder//

the flows forward, but i'll kill this hoe-for-word//
so pray to your-lord, i'm back with a mature-chord//

nice multis and -multiple rhymes-... couple basic lines here and there.. other than that i'd give it a 8/10

i like it...8/10...n u said lets cypher..n i didnt wanna cypher..u fuckin moon john...lol...so next time say lets collab not...lets freestyle....lol...too bad ur retiring tho...or else we could expect more of that...or even COLLAB!!...lol

tom's becoming an old geiser now

EkomS wrote:tom's becoming an old geiser now

Hey now old geiser in da house....
you say that like a bad thing.

its not a bad thing .. cept soon u'll be crippled .. have memory losses.. and die

n shit n piss urself before u die...lol u forgot that one!

lol, doesnt look like a freestyle to me, but yea it was good, really nice multies, it wasnt basic i think the only thing that made it seem like it, was that the syllable count was off in some places, but i do it all the time lol. anyways yea its tight

PrecisE wrote:lol, doesnt look like a freestyle to me, but yea it was good, really nice multies, it wasnt basic i think the only thing that made it seem like it, was that the syllable count was off in some places, but i do it all the time lol. anyways yea its tight

thats cuz it took 20 minutes...lol...he had to correct it to his perfection..hahaha