Quick Freestyle, I did last night

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Quick Freestyle, I did last night

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Viral was to gay to collab with me, so i threw this together, see how i'm retired, ha

everytime i put a-track-in, i'm the biggest attraction//
when a-track-spins, and goes off a-traction//

Illest, I've always had-ya-gaspin, with the maddest-rapping//
every spit an abstraction for my satisfaction//

each rap has more action, nobodies matching//
your-laughing, but the flows like herpes its catching//

i serve cd's with scratching..knive across the top, no room for patching//
freestyle is my only passion...wont stop, even if it never brings the cash-in//

i'll be smashing, and bashing crews into rations//
blasting, and thrashing you into fashion//

ashen my beefs, don't care if your flashing a piece//
I'll be slashing ya niece, trashing beliefs//

crashing-police, into back-seats//
lashing on beats, to these wack-streets//

i don't pack-heat, like florida//
but the track-reach, the quarter//

think you're equal to me you'll get a court order!!//
i'll push ya down the hill on this forum, like a snow boarder//

the flows forward, but i'll kill this hoe-for-word//
so pray to your-lord, i'm back with a mature-chord//
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nice multis and -multiple rhymes-... couple basic lines here and there.. other than that i'd give it a 8/10
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i like it...8/10...n u said lets cypher..n i didnt wanna cypher..u fuckin moon john...lol...so next time say lets collab not...lets freestyle....lol...too bad ur retiring tho...or else we could expect more of that...or even COLLAB!!...lol
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tom's becoming an old geiser now
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EkomS wrote:tom's becoming an old geiser now
Hey now old geiser in da house....
you say that like a bad thing.
Lyrically i kill when my words connect //..That's why these seven bars are five shells in ya chest.
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its not a bad thing .. cept soon u'll be crippled .. have memory losses.. and die
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n shit n piss urself before u die...lol u forgot that one!
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lol, doesnt look like a freestyle to me, but yea it was good, really nice multies, it wasnt basic i think the only thing that made it seem like it, was that the syllable count was off in some places, but i do it all the time lol. anyways yea its tight
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PrecisE wrote:lol, doesnt look like a freestyle to me, but yea it was good, really nice multies, it wasnt basic i think the only thing that made it seem like it, was that the syllable count was off in some places, but i do it all the time lol. anyways yea its tight
thats cuz it took 20 minutes...lol...he had to correct it to his perfection..hahaha
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