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Wrong 4 Me (New Version)

Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 4:29 pm
by Kurse
Before..the original version was just me...but now. We remixxed it! That's right.

Kurse feat. Mz. Syk D

She's new to the rap game. Only 16 and roots from California...but she's got tall potential. She's still in her rookie stages...but this girls got years to grow into her skin & swag! So I wanna help her elevate as an artist and have a little fun at the same time. So this is her and I bringing to you..."WRONG 4 ME"

Enjoy.

Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 12:40 am
by drunken jesus
one of my fav. beats, nice choice

when she talking i dunno it just ain't sound natural

singing ain't bad for an amateur but it could be alot smoother

kurse - flow is a lil choppier than usual in this lyrics are pretty solid, deliverys on point for the most part

mz syk - again not bad at all for an amateur, but she needs to learn how to structure a rhythm, her flow was sloppy but thats mainly because of the way she she wrote, her delivery and tone doesn't really sound natural but that'll come once she finds her niche

outro/hook singing was offkey lol, the not right for me part after that you OD'd with the effects its way too robotic

convo at the end seemed a lil unnatural, i'd scrap it and the outro singing after you sound like a country singer at the end

Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 10:03 am
by Lawgix
it was alright... to be honest not one of my fav remakes... but all in all lyrics were nice... so newayz i liked the old version better lol... well i'm headin back to bed i'm fuckin sick as hell... peace