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Ego-Maniac

Posted: Wed May 02, 2007 3:14 pm
by complexity
Hip-hop will be represented
until every street sees the epidemic
with my lyrics Ill address the senate with no love
Im like Shakespear come highly recommended
fuck Oj, im the best defendant for killing bitches in cold blood
dont show up, you haven't seen this ill since my last session ended
if one cut was less than splendid
I was probably busy beating the fuck out of a sex offendant
every scheme I invented
has been seen in revenge flicks
trying to beat me in a battle is senseless
you'll be on more of a curve than a chapels entrance
im to offensive cross your lines to the defensive
my flow goes beyond apprehension
figuring out my metaphors should be your last intention
old school to the point, I taught classes in past dimensions
my acts of vengeance are to evil
your so wack it causes dissension with your people
your beefs are so weak, I dont even see yours mentioned
when Im gassed-up, I operate more smoothly than a g4s engine
like causing family problems, I'm the the center of a tension
like family matters ask Estelle Winslow
ill leave your grammy battered than thrown out the window
cuz i don't let me no old bitch throw out my demo
my punches old school like boxing in Nintendo
live forever I dont even end shows
dont believe me? even your friend knows
cuz my lines so potent they be up your friends nose
ghost is another bitch I intend to choke
hasn't learned shit in all the time he spent with smoke
looking at your best punches, you have to pretend ya wrote (truth)
don't matter in the (booth) i rip other peoples spits like envelopes
trust me bitch, fear foes..like skinny ten year olds
because we will steer ya soul in the wrong direction
it wont take long to wreck him
so call a strong connection
cuz i better be dead or you will be like a bomb inspection

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Posted: Wed May 02, 2007 9:15 pm
by river_ibe
Thats some good shit right there. I like your rhyming pattern. Sorta rolls off smoothly

Posted: Fri May 04, 2007 10:27 pm
by MesaR
Sorta Bored Me Half Way Through..

It Was Good, Decent For Your Lvl..Seen Better..

It Was Sorta Complacated cuz there were some Dope Lines Mixed in with some Decent Ones. I Thought if u gave this abit more time and reworded this it would be alot better, still was a decent drop, Defiantly Not a Bad Drop!..

Posted: Fri May 04, 2007 11:35 pm
by B-Bear
structure is way off man.. but rhyming was tight...flow was choppy at some times.. gotta agree with seq in u rewording it, cause there's some heavy potential in this piece... keep it up plex!

Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 10:22 am
by complexity
Good points. Thanks