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Wit what my Spirit With Holds, this is the rebirth, My Lyrics are Gold,
I Spit and Mirrors Explode, my depth captures the Fears in yuh Soul,//

Ill make Metals Erode, I throw bricks in my flow fuck Pebbles & Stones,
Im passed gravity, my reality is insanity keeping family to Level the Globe,//

I move Smoother than Butter, thru life, cuz life sucks Im Use to the Gutter,
Ive seen it all, step-dad Abusin my Mother, I guess Im Removin my Clutter,//

Rippin thru the Abdominal, make you fall like Im Tippin over the Domino's,
Complete the Mission as the Abominable, Sittin here to Listen to you Talkative Hoes,//

Battles never Stop, yall are jus the Gravel in the Rocks, drunken Babble to the Cops,
A Vandal on the Plot, highly rated vocab its like as if Im usin Scrabble in my Drops,//

Your manner of which of That is in the Name, Ghost keeping wit beef like Cattle on the Range,
Am I Rattlin yuh Brains, when I say I stay in place, face to face muh fucka Im Strattlin yuh Dames,//

Bars 6 thru 8 Sift thru Fakes, Lifts the Weight, to Affixiate and Switch the Fate of life wit Gifts to Raise,
This Sick Innate, factoid to Twist yuh Face, jus Kiss yuh Faith, goodbye cuz yuh gonna die is Vicious Way,//

This is the Endin of Life, Im sick of yall Pretendin to Write, Ghost is Commencing the Fight,
Yall are barely Comprehendin yuh Rights, but the games over, closed cuz I stopped the Sense of the Strife,//



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i think this wasnt ur best piece,but it was nice.multis as usual and good imagery..flow seemed on point the whole way,structure was pretty good..

I move Smoother than Butter, thru life, cuz life sucks Im Use to the Gutter,
Ive seen it all, step-dad Abusin my Mother, I guess Im Removin my Clutter,//

that bar was the nicest id say cuz it was the deepest 2 me^

thanx for the quick feed bro!!!

UppIN

i liked it stayed on topic well multies good as always flowed nicely except maybe for 1 line structure kinda looks like a stair master..lol agrred not your best but far from worst good job keep doin ya thang...go getta go getta
\\TUSSIN//
Ill make Metals Erode, I throw bricks in my flow fuck Pebbles & Stones,
Im passed gravity, my reality is insanity keeping family to Level the Globe,//
^^ fav

thanx for the feed homie its appreciated!!


UppIN