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Remix I Did
Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 11:34 pm
by -TraMaTiK-
leave sum feed plz
Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 11:43 pm
by -TraMaTiK-
it works this time..lol
Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:56 am
by -TraMaTiK-
ok like 8 or 9 downloads n no feed?lol
Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:55 am
by SlickMex
It was ok..at the end of some of your lines it seemed like you tried to stretch out the word n it didnt sound good...lyrics were ok 4 the most part but coulnt hear them to clear lower the beat n if your good with Cool Edit Pro you prolly could edt it so the mic isnt to bad..
Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:58 am
by -SoahKGniK-
This shit was aight dogg...i felt the concept and everything but i really didnt like the overall song
but anyways its not bad ...its not garbage or nothin but u have to keep workin on it and elevate...
dont be salty or nothin i was just givin u feedback
Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 9:11 am
by -TraMaTiK-
word..i apperciate it ty
Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 11:44 am
by 16 Micz
youir verse was ok, you're voice sounds a bit awkward lol but other than that..theres nothin i can really complain about..so with that said
keep it up, it really wasnt a bad track..but just keep practicing and you'll get better over time..peace
Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 11:51 am
by -TraMaTiK-
lol thanks and ye my throat wuz hurtin that day,but i did it neways..which i shudnt of..but hey it came ok so lol..but thanks man
Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 1:00 pm
by Kurse
Yea...it's not a bad track. But being a 2Pac song the with same instrumental and the same concept is a very hard act to follow. Alot of artists can take an already popular instrumental and give it a whole new theme and make it their own...but same concept with the same muzik is always a challenge. It's like me taking the instrumental to California Love and talkin about my Love for Cali...lol...it's gonna be hard to beat Pac and Dre.
Lyrically is was decently written...but the flow was a bit off occasionally. This track...being a very touchy and emotional concept could've really used alot more of ur emotion! It just seemed like you enjoyed doin it...but you weren't feeling it like you should. Vocals were slightly low and unclear at points. But other than that...it's good to hear you doing more audios to continue to practice and elevate your skill. It's always about encouragement...never negativity. So keep doin what you too. Write about sumthin real close to your heart that means the fuckin world to you...and you'll find the emotion you've been lookin for!
Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 1:58 pm
by -TraMaTiK-
word i kinda had 2 like tone down my lyrics u cud say..cuz i didnt wanna write somethin with alot of multis n shit n have it seem like i was tryna outshine him u no..but i understand what u and the rest of the ppl r sayin..ill work my shiiz n hopefully have this new track written n recorded by sunday so u cud hear it..but thanks 4 the feed from everyone..apperciate it..peace
Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:58 am
by BigP
songs pretty hot for the most part, lol wow some hard work to get his lyrics and beat lined up right, eh, lol. good shit.
Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 6:54 am
by Dead Silence
tha remix was pretty hot the only thing is is that ur voice was distorted terrible bad but other than that i though it was pretty hot
Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 12:52 pm
by -TraMaTiK-
yee man really bad mic LOL but thanks 4 the feed
Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 12:59 pm
by Dead Silence
ne time man