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3 - 0 = K.O

5 - 8 bars max



aii ima goo drop first

wtf ovadose u?what, i thought i put u too a end,but u had too go change ur name
so ima finish u again,u just a fake gangsta rapper that tlks and pretends
but when the beef go down u wanna go and be the freind

but i dont get down like that u fake,come on u a herb give me a break
u the type that wouldnt like too get in trouble much,and when u see ur
boys getting jumped u would hesitate too jump in like double dutch
shit u should get poped like bubble gum

u wanted to go and challange me on aim?ok,so jigsaw do u really wanna play a game?
its gonna involve me lyricaly abusin ur brain until u cant stand the pain,and go physicaly insane
i think this rat ass nigga needs too be tamed,and putting in a cage,and taking away

and nigga if u think u can handle me then u must have shit out of porportion
ill abuse on u so bad,i would make u wish ur mother had an abortion

u gotta regret living,cuz u a ugly virgin that cant attract no women,
u came asking for apologiez,but cant be forgiving,cuz niggas dont
feel what u spitting

ima say it once again,u a fake nigga,a actor tryna get on illest lyrics and play
as a rapper,and bitin of niggas styles u swagger jacker
u a funny cracker,u steping up too a beast i will snap ya
and D.P is my factor,nigga ima bout too end ur chapter,chew u up like a raptor
then spit in ur face after

What u gonna do when ur body is cold and stiff in the morgue,Ur moma cant identify u,
and she screaming too the lord,nobody knows who did it,they just seened u hangin
off a cord,suffercated till u couldnt breath no more and ur throat was sore
u could of lived,but why u had too go talk that shit for?

nice drop streets , u wanna battle me dogg? ill set it up

iigh heres my drop im gonna admit that it was difficult because this stupid nigga dosen't know how to do is bars so i jus followed along....any who heres my drop...if i have to explain any of it let me know cuz theres some things like ryan'o'riley you guys dun kno about but yea extra line cuz this street fuck dosen't know shit ....but yea not my best....personally i whouldn't call it a written cuz its all ova tha fuckken place

Demented-mind the nigga that bit every ~emcees-line~
Sayin you ripped me your mad off your ~grind~
You outta ya goddamn-mind to think you can ~shine~

You was once fake neva caught till i ~caught-u-on-it~
and thos battles you plotted ta diss me they jus ~rotted~
commin at me with the same shit betta learn ya ~phonics~

Im not a carpenter but i'll still roll you up and smoke you like ~chronic~
A virgin nigga please ive attracted more celebrities then you ever seen
Im mean and not with an attitude be greatful nigga cuz ill rip you off at the ~seem~

Buddy you talk alotta shit for a street nigga behind a ~screen~
Yes i wanna play a game and it's where JigSaw makes you ~scream~
It's real no movie have your brains fallin off ya neck like ~ice-cream~

Battlin you is not blown outta por-por-tion you the1 faken an ~ex-tor-tion(est)~
All your lines are fake your fake nigga back off from rap and take a ~break-riche-rich~
fuck thorwin me ina cage you snitch re-arange ya face like i ~break-the-bricks~

Lines-like-this have you sniffin *coke* like ~murder-she-wrote~
Yes This is the end of you like nasa callin of a ~mission-abort~
Street Pharmacist couldn't ball even if you was on a ~court~

Oh shit im swagger-jacker not like you a ~fagget-tryna-be-cracker~
Can't wreck ya style lift and shift you respit the ~maggot-rhyma-night-ridah~
dick sucka can't step this ya face is already bent like you had a rough day and got ~fired~

But you don't want it with me your to damn ~grimey~
You come around here i was born in tha ~ninteys~
find this battle is your weaskest outbreak like herpes on ~ryan'o'riley~

Multies=Neither really
Flow=JIG
PUNCHES=JIG
STRUCTURE=NEITHER
ENTERTAINMENT=STREETZ

VOTE=JIG

I wasnt going to vote but I dont think anyone else is going to so I will

Let me start off with what I thought of your verses lol

Street - Your shit was VERY elementary...I dont even think your punches were really punches. And the ones you did attempt were either overplayed or just retarded. I felt you were writing him a letter and just talking a bunch of smack I'd hear out of a five year olds mouth instead of doing a battle. Now dont get me wrong, everyone has to start somewhere and good job at an attempt...but you sure talk ALOT of shit about how much better you are then everyone else and havent you been battling for awhile now? Ok anyway, your attempt at multis at the end were nice, it gave something to your verse. But good job none the less

JigSaw - Yours as well was extremly simple, I think you're both stuck on one syllable words to an extent. You had a better foundation as far as punches go but with more thought and being more complex your punches could have hit hard. Now if Im correct you flipped alot of shit in this battle and thats against the rules so Im not sure where you two stand on that rule as far as who gets the win. B/c technically if Street thinks you flipped and others agree he can DQ you but thats all on him. Anyway good job as well

Im not breaking this shit into cats but my vote goes to JigSaw

2-0 uppin

SOMEONE FUCKEN VOTE!

ok im not much of a writter myself but this had to be THE worst battle ever on illest imo. JIGSAW took this but only coz streetz shit was like wack.

street- i didnt see a structure or a flow at all, your punches were overly forced, you didnt really make sense to me, and i just didnt like the verse period.

Jigsaw- yours was alotta better than his coz at least it a tad more structured and your punches were better than his.

vote= Jigsaw. i didnt like this battle at all.

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