Hip Hop Forum

hmm....

Short...you should add to this, It could be a very solid piece with some more length

I liked it, I liked what you were saying but I think you coulda been a lil more complex with it. You still got what you were thinking out in a strong way, some of the content was kinda creepy? or just weird lol but nice drop doooood

yea..i agree some pretty solid shit...you did could with the "descriptive" writing,and your multis were pretty good..the flow was ok...it was a short piece so..it flowed well throughout the whole thing..

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i just thought id embrace ya with some thoughts i had
this is why i grabbed a pen and bought tha pad...

its sick tha way i paint pictures on tha scriptures page
i must be a beast tha way i flip tha mage
its like i continue to write shit for days
while i approach tha pad in mystic ways
im a knight comin from a different age

flow and multis on that was nice....keep it up and thanks for the feedback on my drop...

"you did could with the "descriptive" writing,and"

Exactly.

Sorta..

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