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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 7:25 am
by ~*Blitz*~
hmm, intresting concept. Some good bars but I wasnt realy feeling it I guess b/c I dont like the topic lol. But its a good poem none the less. Good Work JJ *thumbs up*
Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 4:25 pm
by *.HarleQuin.*
death brings white hands like placeable mimes
you can always view death through tha window of time
death is tha resolution of a soldier and his widdows shrine
i like this part of the poem the most, i seen the imagery u were trying to use in this, especially the spider creeping..nice drop MAC!!
Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 5:01 am
by Spoof
I liked this one! I was feeling it and it was interesting
always seein twisted capable minds
death brings white hands like placeable mimes
you can always view death through tha window of time
death is tha resolution of a soldier and his widdows shrine
^^^my fav lines! Hot hot!
Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 1:47 pm
by RH1NO
tha nights are dark but an illusive mind always makes shit darker
many attemps to cover up mistakes like sketches with markers
^^ fav lines
nice drop stay up