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here is my first battle vs the crack ho......

ill have my shit flowin worse then menstrual flow
imma hit this out the park, hammer throw
aight fuck this, its time for the donnie mac show
your missin the mark, hittin the rim, shaq free throw
my words hit you hard like tsunami, tidal flow
hbo...stealin cable, thinking you a thug
must be trippin, hallucinogenic drug
imma absorb your shit and sweep it under the rug
youll just smile, and giggle give a little shrug
whisky jug...boston, irish, i bet you are
daddy ditched you and your momma for some smoky bar
gettin towed off, paddy wagon, or patrol car
cookie jar...and your sheltered reality
a day in my hood would mean instant fatality
babies born, congenital abnormality
day in, day out concrete brutality
commonality...you used to freckled faces
stand on a cliff and walk forward a million paces
the comfort of your computer, no mingled races
universities, and wide open spaces.

Might have a tidal flow but you ain't takin' my title though,
Inspite of those who land punches on their final blow,
I'm humilating and causin' you some -Major Payne-,
I'll treat you worse than an animal if you can't refrain, I'll strictly train,
I really don't know what to say but I already know the outcome,
So slow with a flow you're like a retard kid shoutin' no doubt son,
This is like changing ya diaper with the way you throw out some,
Fuck a Donnie Mac show cause I'm the Donnie Brasco,
Chew you up and spit you out more than tobacco,
I'm hotter than tobasco and El Paso,
So if you wanna pass flows,
Ask those who have felt my wrath with the last load,
So I skip through these emcees like whip lash was standing,
and establish speeds hittin' top knotched like the Maverick,
I think it's pretty sick too, coming from an average,
cause we don't really need to put this into basics,
I'll throw out some weak raps with some spaces,
So you can read every word and verb that ever faces,
the way in which i want it to break spits,
cause i'm sick of these emcees that take lyrics and fake shit.

i dont think this needs to be broke down, good try overkill

yeah, crack basically took this in every area

yea man good try overkills when you rhyme it would sound much better if u rhyme thwe last two words instead of just the last one which made it sound a lil choppy and messed up but keep it up who knows yea so ill give this to Crack Kills w/ his wack skills lol

complexity wrote:i dont think this needs to be broke down, good try overkill

I really wasn't up to doing this, but not excepting is worse than losing it self.

Crack, you ripped it...dude if i was able to vote i would.

preciated, my man... anytime for a rematch...

ok so crackbaby wins this topic closed-