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All Races Just Seem To Egnite The Flame Racist Remarks Just Feed-The-Pain..//
I Wanna Quit And Leave The Game, Who cares bout skin couler when we bleed-tha-same..//
Were Out Of Minds We Need-a-Brain..We Gotta Keep It Real And Just Leave-The-Fame..//
I Do Belive-In-Pain..But Were Humans Not Animals But We Cant Acheive-Were-Tame..//
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Life Isnt a Fair Trail Because Were all Guilty For The Things-We-Done..//
A Kid At School Couldnt Take It And Decided To Bring-His-Gun..//
People Thought He Was Crazy Wonted Him Dead, Couldnt Sleep At Night..//
Thats Fine You Can Take My Life But Its Not a Crime Cause What i Done Was Right..//

This World Is Much Of Yours As Its Mine I got The Knowledge To Silence-Teachers..//
Even Though My Words Calm Down For Now Blood Is Spilling When The Vilence-Increases..//

this was alright, nothing bad but nothing special if u get me.
i liked the first few lines

All Races Just Seem To Egnite The Flame Racist Remarks Just Feed-The-Pain..//
I Wanna Quit And Leave The Game, Who cares bout skin couler when we bleed-tha-same..//
Were Out Of Minds We Need-a-Brain..We Gotta Keep It Real And Just Leave-The-Fame..//

i didnt really like the last bar. but thats just my opinion

Aight I thought this was real good..like the topic n the multis were good to me..Uppin For Feed..

ur first bar was ok... then it just all went downhill from there

nice drop flow was decent but multies were nice n topic stayed on point good job S.W.A.T.

EkomS wrote:ur first bar was ok... then it just all went downhill from there

basically, it wasn't awful it wasn't anything quotable either