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Whatever rules she said..
Due Fri...
8 Bars..
Team Votes r ok..
Explanations on votes..

I wrote this quick cuz i aint gonna b on 2morro..
Coulda done better but o well..

A yo Sam I checked out your myspace, nothing special to see..
at first I thought I saw ur pretty face, but then it was jus the reflection of me..

says “your gonna regret it babesâ€

i tried something different this time..flowing off the top of the head
so let me know how i did when u vote please! = )

this fag gets turned on at the thought of anal penetration
im about to deport this bitch u can call me US immigration//
you comin at me is illegal like ya daddy's bank deposit
claimin u get pussy but the only "pink u see is in ur closet"//
u a thug? ur 16 and ya name is david.. bitch get serious
and whats up wit ya gay myspace pics im thinkin u a little 'curious' //
ya rhymes aint sick, i know ya every move so where u slick at mex?
no strength in ya punches cus in gay bars is the only time u quick to flex//
no wonder u like dick cus getting sodomized is the only time ya ass is slick
i got this bitch sweatin traumatized, at the thought of battling this chick//
you aint a fairy? dude ur avatars mexican rip off of tom and jerry
your balls aint even hairy, u couldnt get sex any city even if ya name was 'carrie'//
this pussy is sloppy. i dont know if he typin in morse code our countin his periods
crazy in love with me but thinkin u can win kid u must be delirious//
ur funny little twat and its really sad when i can rip every 'rapper' in da swat
but i guess thats what happens when a bunch of pussies try to be what they're not//

http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.c ... ID=8021409
^^the pink in the closet line and the gay pic line
uh carrie's the chick from sex in the city
and the rest should be explanatory...

vote - harlequin

this was a pretty close battle, slick mex your verse wasn't bad you had better multis and flow for the most part but your lines weren't too consistant or clever you had a few good punches then a few ehhh ones, harlequin your verse lacked in multis and flow but you had some nice personals and were pretty consistant throughout with disses some things could've been worded better but overall it was solid and to the point

this was a good battle, damn close if you ask me.

Slick: you verse was written well for a battle, but i times i felt you didnt have enuff creativity in your lines, and some of them could of been re-worded a lil better. but overall it was writtin very well.

HQ: your verse/structure was in different style and it was easier to read and made your punches/personals hit a lot harder. your verse was a lil more creative than slicks, it seemed that you put some effort into your lines.

Punches - Tie
Personals - HQ
Structure/Flow - HQ
Multies - Slick
Entertainment - HQ

Vote: HQ

2-0 HQ

Harlequin won this one with overall, she had a better verse and came harder

Slick you're doing alot better though with your battles

vote - harlequin