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LadySam start us off...
Go on... Admit it boys, I know I stole your heart...
Now ur all hatin on me cause u'll never get this piece of art/
This Sam is destructive, She'll make u blast before Nassar hits zero
I'm the captain of this ship, Don't claim to be my one and only hero/
I'm like the sun on the first day of summer, You wait anxiously for my perfect shine
Cause theres nobody like this stunner, I'm picture perfect... Oh so fine/
I'm the rainbow in the sky, Yea that flashy lightining
Ladysam printed on ur eyes, Yea I'm lyrically frightening/
This threesome is weak without me, i gotta killer personalitly
sexually seduce whoevers near thee, best believe im ur cuppa tea/
I'm not as lyrically inclined as my colleagues, I wont lyrically 'slice your throat'
But i make up for that in every other cat, And still have you dreamin 'I'll rock ur boat'/
I'm like rain during a drought, People beggin to see me spit
Im like the sun during winter,Of all three Sam's Im the most legit/
Mark my name into your brain like its a famous quote
I promote myself I dunt need anyone else, So fuck all your votes/


Harlequins on fire
theres no where to hide im like genocide, a blatant crime against humanity
i verbally demolish your braincells like cyanide, greedily chewing on your insanity//

im that icing on the cake so how these bitches topping me? no force is ever stoppin me
constantly takin all votes, you can call harlequin the female savior of democracy//

obviously its the bitch in me that's easily causing u to lyrically worship me
full steam ahead like a red bull but instead this chick is robbin ya energy//

guttin dames relentlessly ,rippin lames destructively swayin opinions seductively
misleading 'rappers' so called teasing me cus i gotta clit and still i spit appeasingly//

u already know my shits gonna be fire before i even post it, im like the premonition of ill
with the quickness i explode my verbal sickness so u already know my demolition is real//

this fiasco dont make u daydream for hours, my lyrics cause dumb fucks to fantasize
lyrically creating visions of demise,see ya career decomposing rite before ur very eyes?//

put me to the test? i'll slit her chest,leavin breasts out like bars at mardi gras
i posses no flaws so u claim rell writes my bars but the only things supportin ms sam is vicky bras//

mean ass bitch, they call me pandora cus when u tamper with my 'box', i cause global upsets
if it wasnt for me all fems would be good for is dick ridin and distilled concepts//

Now i'll wrap this up
All these bitches wanna be me, My language is astounding,
I AM the ILLEST femcee, Which one of you wanna crown me?/
A ThreeSam collab is an event bigger then the Grammy's
Run at the mouth all you want, Still cant fuck with three Sammy's/
When you read the shit we write you'll be left with a chubby
After this collabs through there aint no way you aint gonna love me/
Text as Fresh as pressed jeans and a white tee
You gotta respect 'Sam' times ' Three' but you aint gotta like me/
We're real on the net but we're livelier in the streets
Blowing up sites just like we're *McGiver* on these beats/
*Duct Tape* and a mic and we're ready to battle these kids
We're the underdogs that rose to the top just like *radio* did/
Us femcees need to be treated like the rest of you
Cause soon you know we're gonna be the best of you/
Ima female yes and my crew just set sail for other femcees
Threesam not only reps up, We just duplicated the fucken industry/

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Alright, I switched my style up a bit to see how it worked for me - Im not sure if I liked it lol. And I think Ima stick with what Im used to.

Harlequin shined in this collab so lets give her the props she deserves

LadySam as well has elevated a butt load and it shows!

Good job girls, we rawk =)

Nice..Yea I like ur original way Blitz..Harlequin did out shine everyone else..N Sam a lot better then ur last one ur improving a bunch..Blitz N Fiasco..kinda got the vibe that yall were dissin each other..its a group work so i dont understand that lol..But it was real good..Maybe next time yall can write about a topic(not tha this isnt a topic but yea)..Good Job..

dissin eachother? lol...i think you took the bars the wrong way...thats the most retarded thing ive ever heard

i thought it was good... most deff harlequin shined in this one... lines were kinda dragged on... seemed a lil forced too... but nice drop from all of you... good job ladies i give this a 7/10

u already know my shits gonna be fire before i even post it, im like the premonition of ill
with the quickness i explode my verbal sickness so u already know my demolition is real//

put me to the test? i'll slit her chest,leavin breasts out like bars at mardi gras
i posses no flaws so u claim rell writes my bars but the only things supportin ms sam is vicky bras//

these 2 bars by harlequin are impressive^^^ good job

this was fairly similair to the last collab you all did together, hana's getting much better with her lyrics, n that wasnt bad blitze you still came with good lines haha you said you werent gonna drop cause you lost your verse n had to rewrite the entire thing. overall it was good, n harlequin stole the show this time

I did lose my verse and I did re-write but I had a couple of bars that I had typed out from the last verse

think it was all pretty fire n it was a collab which i like seen so extra points for that 8/10
fav -lines
hq
put me to the test? i'll slit her chest,leavin breasts out like bars at mardi gras
i posses no flaws so u claim rell writes my bars but the only things supportin ms sam is vicky bras//

lady
This Sam is destructive, She'll make u blast before Nassar hits zero
I'm the captain of this ship, Don't claim to be my one and only hero/

blitz
*Duct Tape* and a mic and we're ready to battle these kids
We're the underdogs that rose to the top just like *radio* did/

nice job ladies

haha how hot r we?!?!
i thought my verse was really good till these two ladies showed up lol
so like i said in my other thread. if u culd harshly criticise me on wat im doing wrong i'd like that, im sure ull have fun doing it too

yeah the feed is deffo appreciated..and more is always welcomed = )

Ok Here i Go lol.
Tbh i Preferred The Last Collab lol, This Seemed Just More Like a Sequel Lol. Harlequin Deffo Had The Best Verse Outta The 3, By a Long Shot, She Was The Most Original And Creative. Blitz Didn't Really impress Me This Time Around With The 'New Style' lol Dont Get Me Wrong it Was Still Good But it Just Didnt Work For Me. Thats Really All The Nagative i Could Say. Now Onto The Positives.
LadySam is Getting a Lot More Stingy With Punches, Her Shit's Always The Funniest To Read Outta The 3 lol. Just Blatantly To The Point And No Beating Around The Bush. id Say For u, ur Structure, Multis And Vocab Are What Need To Be Worked On. Make Lines Deeper, i Like The New Rhymestyle u Have Going On Though. Example.

I'm the rainbow in the sky, Yea that flashy lightining
Ladysam printed on ur eyes, Yea I'm lyrically frightening/
This threesome is weak without me, i gotta killer personalitly
sexually seduce whoevers near thee, best believe im ur cuppa tea/
^Those 2 Bars Basically Touched All i Mentioned. Structure is iffy But u Got an Unique Way Of Rhyming it's Not Generic at All lol So u Need To Elevate ur Style And Master it.

Mark my name into your brain like its a famous quote
I promote myself I dunt need anyone else, So fuck all your votes/
^My Fav Bar From u, Punches Were Dope.

Now Onto Harlequin. ur Vocab is Outstanding Lol And it Fits With The Style u Use. Dont Overdo it Though Cuz You'll End Up Like Canibus Haha. ur Not Overdoing it Though. Punches And Multis in This Were Dope as Fuck. You've Really Elevated Since The Last One But What u Gtta Work On is Flow And Line Length.

theres no where to hide im like genocide, a blatant crime against humanity
i verbally demolish your braincells like cyanide, greedily chewing on your insanity//

im that icing on the cake so how these bitches topping me? no force is ever stoppin me
constantly takin all votes, you can call harlequin the female savior of democracy//

obviously its the bitch in me that's easily causing u to lyrically worship me
full steam ahead like a red bull but instead this chick is robbin ya energy//
^ill 3 Bars And They Stood Out The Most. The Red Bull Line is Fucking Awesome lol. So Props On That.

Now Onto Blitz. ur The One Who's Stepped Their Game Down Since The Last Collab. Unfortunately lol. it Seemed Really Rushed And The Flow Was a Bit iffy Like Every 2 Lines. ur Multis Were Still Here Though So Word. ur Punches Were a Bit Dull in This One Unlike The Last Collab, So u Need To Get Back On it lol.

Run at the mouth all you want, Still cant fuck with three Sammy's/ <--Example

Text as Fresh as pressed jeans and a white tee <--And Another lol.

But u Did Have Some Good Things Like The MacGyver Which Was Clever How u Kinda Went MacGyver Yourself And Used Regular Household items To Make Punches LoL, And u Had a Couple Of Nice Punches But Overall ur Verse Wasnt Solid Enough lol. Dont Rush Shit!!!

Overall Well Done Again, Like i Said it Was Less interesting Than The Last One To Me Cuz it Was Like a Sequel Where u Just Touched The Same Topics as Last Time. Some Worked Better Than Others With it. And Work On What i Said!!! Lol Good Shit Though

ladysam - solid verse, you're alot more basic than the other two but you seem to be elevating you have alright concepts you just need to get your complexity and cleverness up

harlequine - i was digging the raw approach you've stepped your vocabulary and multi game up had a few good quotables fell off in places but overall you had the best verse last line was illll pretty much describing lawgix

blitz - verse was solid, wasn't one of your best efforts though, the rhyme scheme was on and off a lil choppy but you picked it up lyrically toward the end

overall it was a good job ladies, better than the last one you dropped

ThaOneYouHate wrote:this is to LadySam seems how ya said let ya know if you're doin anything wrong.. you aren't really doin anything wrong at all just coming a little basic and at times your bars are a bit forced but alotta times it's better to basic then complex until you get better even though you're elevating quickly..it seems as if you're a little repetitive too but thats just what i see dont know if anyone else does but ayy keep on droppin ya doin good

funnily enough i totally agree, i dnt think theres anything wrong with what i write, i think im jus tooo basic. i need to get my vocab up, and i think im deffo repeating myself, lmao but its all i can think offf! argh! haha

This was Fire Ladies!

The verse were put in jus the right order to,

LadySam i do see improvement of flow, and your tryin to use some more vocab, but when you write try to visualize what you feel and capture it wit your words.

HQ - best damn thing ive seen from you, you impress me everytime you drop (nice battle as well), you have elevated to the top of your game very quickly and still have room to grow. even though your verse was fire, some bars are stretched and seem a "lil" forced at times, but yo big ups.

Blitz - Whats Up Girl? now Im not gonna lie this wasnt your best verse ive ever read. But nowhere near bad, had more of a deeper vibe to it, by deeper i mean meaningful, like you were summin up the 3Sams. which i really liked as well, I thought you verse was up there wit HQs. Jus keep yuh head up.

And Ladies Keep Doin Yuh Thang!!!