Down ones.

[$hayne]

The ones who were always down and around were my krazy krew
The stories you heard bout us it's likely that they be true
My mom was there she's amazin' too always made me food
My pops was there he rasied me through my krazy youth
My older Sis keeps it legit sellin' weed
she'll fold you quick she's bringin hell on E (hell on earth)
Every bag she gotta list of that shit n a few prior felonies
My younger sis keeps it on the real though
Good grades cheerleader i always ask her hows it feel yo?
My cousin's are hard and keep it down to earth
They'll be leavin' you scard, you'll be down and hurt
That's it for my family, now i'm the man to beat
I'm so hott it's like the feelin of the miami heat
no wait fuck that it's like i'm livin' in the land of heat
Not many ma' fuckers can stand with me.//

[~Symbolikull~]

you need a link to feed you left on others drops, and then maybe youll get feedback

[~*Blitz*~]

no linky...tsk tsk tsk

Anyway, this was alright...the way you write some of your lines confuses me, its like your missing a word here and there. It was simple but it flowed decently. Good job, keep @ it