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5 and 15 about to be 5 and 16, you couldn't get High wit 6 Teens,
I line up my rhymes at Spines and Split Spleens, you Spit Heat?,
Where? Cuz I Havent Seen It, Are you Keepin it a Secret?,
Drink It! A womans Secretion, to flow sick to leave you Speechless,
I Punch Irate, to Punctuate the life of TheOneYouHate,
You couldn't Cuff the Weight, to hold it, you're a 1 and 8th,
Of my Skill, searchin for yourself as an MC thru Text like Who Am I?
Im the Nuclei so Take your own advice and committ to Death thru Suicide,
I Attack Fluids, this kids foolish, useless, Smart? His whole Acts Stupid,
As I stand still I Blast Thru It, wit no improvement his words Lack Movement,
He's like a Stray Dog roamin the earth for a new place to Call Home,
I left him witta swollen head, like hes got a big brain and a Small Dome,

punches:sym
multis:sym
flow:sym
entertainment:sym
personals:tie
structure:sym

vote = sym

1-0 UppIn

punches - symbolikull
multies - symbolikull
entertainment - symbolikull
flow - TOUH
personals - symbolikulls hit harder

vote = symbolikull

good round from u guys JJ u dropped a nice verse some of it i didn't understand but ur gettin better just keep workin at it man... Ghost u killed it haha plain and simple ripped it good job

peace

2-0 Thanx

This battle goes out to 16Micz my best friend

you couldnt write nice if you were bitin cass... - simple but it works
treat you like paper ill shit on you while i whipe my ass - played concept
hit you with so many punches you'll think this is a Roy Jones or Tyson fight... - played concept
i'ma beast wouldnt matter if you were native you still couldnt kill a byson right - seems like you were struggling to rhyme with tyson fight, cause this ain't really a well worded diss at all
treat you like ivy while i just scratch tha pad... - worded badly, too simple
im sonnin you like you aint no match fa dad - forced multi, played
you couldnt sky if you were a fighter jet... - "you couldn't sky" wtf
you aint burnin nothin ya lighters wet - eh, decent
im sorry fa downin ya pride... - alright for a set-up
my heat burns so im brownin ya hide - decent, not real creative
you couldnt throw punches if i gave ya Rocky's gloves... - simple
you stuck on feather weight like you're a box of dove - doesn't really connect or hit hard cause it don't make sense


5 and 15 about to be 5 and 16, you couldn't get High wit 6 Teens, - couldn't get high with 6 teens? forced multi ain't really a diss
I line up my rhymes at Spines and Split Spleens, you Spit Heat? - filler
Where? Cuz I Havent Seen It, Are you Keepin it a Secret?, - decent
Drink It! A womans Secretion, to flow sick to leave you Speechless, - worded badly, flow sick etc is played as fuck
I Punch Irate, to Punctuate the life of TheOneYouHate, - filler
You couldn't Cuff the Weight, to hold it, you're a 1 and 8th, - forced multi if he was 1 and an 8th, that'd mean he was better
Of my Skill, searchin for yourself as an MC thru Text like Who Am I? - decent
Im the Nuclei so Take your own advice and committ to Death thru Suicide, - nuclei part is filler, rest was a cool personal
I Attack Fluids, this kids foolish, useless, Smart? His whole Acts Stupid, - attack fluids is forced, rest is just filler
As I stand still I Blast Thru It, wit no improvement his words Lack Movement, - decent
He's like a Stray Dog roamin the earth for a new place to Call Home, - weak simile for a diss
I left him witta swollen head, like hes got a big brain and a Small Dome - decent



this was a mediocre battle, both of you came pretty basic and didn't display much creativity, symbolikul had alot of babble and theoneyouhate had alotta played shit


flow - symbolikul
wordplay - theoneyouhate
personals - symbolikul
multis - symbolikul
creativity - neither


vote - symbolikull

3-0 ko symbolikull takes the win

good battle u 2

-thread closed records updated-

3-0 KO

Micz I LOVE YOU!!!!

Im in eternal debt to you

Fuckin Faggot!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL


someone update please