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Blitz Advances

September 20th, 2001


Dear diary,
i dont know if its the drugs that inspire me
maybe its the fiery, evil soul, that burns inside of me

but the years past and the joy of blood,tears, and pain all grew
the dream was all true, where i took over a ballroom

one by one, i watched each victim fall, til the last breath
never asked wheres the cash at, or cared for the cars and assets

just took off my glasses, gave myself a silent countdown
and now the fun began, after the first loud sound

its hard to explain the feelings when you frighten a whole room
women tighten their vocals,locked the doors that their fightin to go through

some are dying to know who, has fired off those tools
they immediately, looks at the light skinned ol'dude, those fools

and realize the only thing they hold to, is their lives that they owe you
you grew up with lies, watched your father die, and no one told the truth

it has only been 9 days since the last tragic event
they were all laughin at me man, but now they got to go where my dad was happily sent


Sincerely,
20 Micz

BLITZ VERSE



The Diary of a mother fucken serial killer....


I Open my book with my pen in my hand, These morbid thoughts consuming my mind
With all these evil plans I'm stressed out as fuck, So I'll aim, shoot and un-wind/
Plotting an evil plan my next victim lies ahead, Slice them, Drown them, Or a shot to the head?
Orgasm off of hearing them plead cry and beg, Tortue them through misery while I drink the blood they bled/
I trap my lines between bars like my victims, Kill a jew on Saturday night, Then on Sunday a christian
I rub them the wrong way you call it friction, Killing them by numbers is simply my addiction/
Disfiguring bodies like it's a hobby, I pick up an axe and swing with ease
I'll crack open your cranium just to take a peek inside and see what your mind reads/
Im searing flesh with fire like I'm satan, I'll kill off this whole fucken town
One by one ill roast them, Toast them and let there fluids seep into the ground/
A gleeful squeal as you wonder why I only throw out a few boiled bones
Its because I eat the flesh and use the rest to build my twisted ass throne/
Diary I need you to know I'll never stop this twistedness, I kill more then a hired gun
Because after all this, Us serial killers have a job to do that will never EVER be done/
Hired by wives, She wants you dead and its easy to thrill-her
You're my next victim, Its just a normal day in the life of a serial killer/

can someone who actually knows how to rap, and knows different aspects of it..evaluate this and tell me who won..

i'd vote for micz in this, but really the two approached it completely differently

micz wrote it like a diary entry, blitz wrote more of an overview and summary of what shes planning on doing as opposed to what she did, both were on and off with the rhyme schemes and flow, both stayed on topic well but the main thing they both lacked was imagery

DJ...can i give him my spot in the tourney and it be legit? Because thats what I'd like to do

BTW you FUCKERS, I cleaned up this thread - Can we please leave it on topic now and if you arent an admin then dont leave your two cents...kthnx

ghost, i dont care bout her winning, i just want the loss off my record, you two can go on with ur tourney, the outcome of this does not affect ur tourney, i kno how bad u want to win a fuckin tourney..lol..well i guess ill wait for plex's vote...

~*Blitz*~ wrote: BTW you FUCKERS, I cleaned up this thread - Can we please leave it on topic now and if you arent an admin then dont leave your two cents...kthnx

^^^

~*Blitz*~ wrote:DJ...can i give him my spot in the tourney and it be legit? Because thats what I'd like to do

nah, you can't just give-up or trade places, you won the battle

if micz appeal is successful (2 other admins have to believe he won), the loss will be removed from his record

so basically, if the appeals successful you still won blitz, but micz didn't lose, if that makes any sense lmao

and ya'll can carry the little childish parade out of this section, ghost if i remember correctly you were pretty pissy when harlemqueen came realllll close to beating you 'till you suddenly got like 3-4 votes in a row and won

and da guy, you lost in the second round of this tourney, so the whole holier than thou type attitude isn't too logical, same goes to you too slickmex you lost in the first

the point of this section isn't to express petty bitterness and bicker over dumb shit, its to get a second review of a decision that you don't feel is just, theirs users of all skill levels on this site so it is possible that someone can lose a battle they should of one, and the point isn't to give up just to try to bury the hachet blitz, everyones over 12 here so no ones feelings are going to get hurt over an internet battle

having confidence in whatever you do is important but finding the perfect medium between modesty and cockyness isn't the easiest, especially when every individuals opinion of you is different

in my opinion, some of the votes were probably bullshit, but both have fairly equal legitimate claims of why they should win so it is what it is.

thanks DJ

drunken jesus wrote:

~*Blitz*~ wrote:DJ...can i give him my spot in the tourney and it be legit? Because thats what I'd like to do

nah, you can't just give-up or trade places, you won the battle

if micz appeal is successful (2 other admins have to believe he won), the loss will be removed from his record

so basically, if the appeals successful you still won blitz, but micz didn't lose, if that makes any sense lmao

and ya'll can carry the little childish parade out of this section, ghost if i remember correctly you were pretty pissy when harlemqueen came realllll close to beating you 'till you suddenly got like 3-4 votes in a row and won

and da guy, you lost in the second round of this tourney, so the whole holier than thou type attitude isn't too logical, same goes to you too slickmex you lost in the first

the point of this section isn't to express petty bitterness and bicker over dumb shit, its to get a second review of a decision that you don't feel is just, theirs users of all skill levels on this site so it is possible that someone can lose a battle they should of one, and the point isn't to give up just to try to bury the hachet blitz, everyones over 12 here so no ones feelings are going to get hurt over an internet battle

having confidence in whatever you do is important but finding the perfect medium between modesty and cockyness isn't the easiest, especially when every individuals opinion of you is different

in my opinion, some of the votes were probably bullshit, but both have fairly equal legitimate claims of why they should win so it is what it is.

u kno...sometimes i feel bad for ya...lol...always having to go into detail for people to understand situations...lol...wat is this world coming to!?

My decision is 16 won this...he had some real feelings behind u can put urself in that situation...espicially if ya lost ur pops and u know how it feels...but yea i think 16 just had a better flow and better entertainment....but blitz was tight and stayed on subject but like dj said they both approached it differently...

revote=16micz...

2 out of 3 is good enough for me, 16 gets the loss removed

blitz your lines were too long to the point that the readers stops wanna reading cause the piece seriously lacks flow.