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..i know it's a bit off, but i wrote it off the top of my head. grrr


its six A.M, im waking up to my cell phone ringing
ya breath is skakeing rough, im worried about the tone ya bringing
it seems you tried to pull it fast, it brought me to dire emotions
exposed ya scheme on full-blast, caught and put fire to such "devotion"
how could you say those words to me? i trusted them.. i thought it was true
was it good to play this curse so rudely? im so disgusted, i saught to love you..
now that you practically spit on me, you're on your knees now sharply pleading
a second chance is all you need, but your words are hardly worth beleiving
you knocked me completley out of order, my stomach cant bare hold down a meal
to put it discreetly, you pasted my border, you drowned me cold with what you revealed
so im gonna put it nicely, you might enjoy this rhyme, didn't take much time but it's true
"roses are red, violets are blue, you "love me" ..but im so through wit you".

lol thanksss :]
yeah i admit the endin line was really corny, but oh well haha

ooooooh....i liiiike it!...alotta emotion....good stuff...keep it up.....n no frontin sons no seeds on the bun!!

Lol ..
Pretty Good Mamii ..
U Did ya Thing ..
Yeah Tha Last Line Was Kinda Corny ..
But Everythin` Else Was Solid ..
Keep Droppin` ..

woooohaaaaaaaa men suckkkkk YAY <3
i shall become a nun after this drop lmao
keep dropping stina!
id like to hear more from u

You Got It "Twisted"

I woke up in a cold sweat... had a feeling the stormy night i tried to ignore would get to me... i'd say it was about six in the morning, couldn't be to early right, i mean after all "the early bird gets the worm" but who would of thought that worm was a "snake" anyways... i grabbed the phone, so many thoughts running through my head... my head so full of fucking pressure, maybe thats why my knees kept buckling under me, i had to end this, and with that in mind I started to dial her number... every ring killed my future, finally... a pick up on the other line... hmm not a voice i recognize, couldn't be "dad" yea me and her father were close, you tend to get close after a five year relationship, with hesitation i spoke... "who is this?, is katie there?" damn who would of thought she already made my decision for me... "this is Jeff... katie's man, who the hell is this?"... fuck it click!

Freestyled haha

oh shit ! haha

interestin piece, definately looks like you put alotta emotion in it n had a clear message to convey, looks like one of those drops that was for theraputic purposes, great stuff for sure

btw some guys are more "E.V.I.L." than others haha

donnie... and mine?? comeone asshole