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I tried to deny my true intuition//
like a trained navy seal aborting the mission//

and when people start askin me to express my voice//
i reach for my pen, my weapon of choice//

i tried to tell myself that i aint no good//
that ill never make it, since i aint from the hood//

and that nobody carez about lil white cappz//
about suicide death and handicap facts// (refers to loss of my friends)

well the traps have been laid//
and the stage has been made//

and ive yet to be paid//
but i wont let it phase//

cuz all i want is my voice to be heard through the noise//
spread the word to your boys time to stop with the toys//

and grow up to be men, and ill say it again//
grab your pen and defend cuz were under attack.

not bad...i can see u still got ur skillz goin u jst gotta open em back up...the cyphers r by far the best uve posted on here...i dnt see y u dont post some good writtens like dat...oh well...keep it up man...peeace

Thanks, it always been hit or miss, pending on frestyle and cypher.

yea wat viral said.. ur other written was good.. lil short but good.. this one wasn't too bad but seemed kinda basic and some rhymes were a lil off too