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Unlike being completely illiterate. When you have this disease you can read lyrics, write lyrics, and even battle. The problem is you can't do it good. You don't take any constructive criticism to improve. Basically you're at a stagnant state for eternity.

Some people may even tell you that you're good. Which will boost your self confidence.
The problem is you will listen to these individuals over the masses who tell you that you're
a piece of shit.

Other symptoms of this disease are making obscure references to star wars, canceled 80's television shows, and scientific inaccuracies.
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Post by drunken jesus »

also making verses in broken english with random simpsons character references that only appeared in one episode is another symptom
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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*cancels all lyrics about frank grimes aka grimey*
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Ehhh?
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Post by precise »

LMAO! good call

i guess ill have to stop using all my real witty punches like "loser your a beverly hillbilly" <-- that ones a killer itll be a shame to lose it
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fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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Post by drunken jesus »

Tha Kulprit wrote:*cancels all lyrics about frank grimes aka grimey*
i forgot all about this till now

but


behold


"typeo"


http://www.ezforum.org/freestyle/freest ... ut404.html
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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yo is that wat the forum use to look like?
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yo man where u get dat shit from?....didnt kno there was ne thing left from the old forums...dats funny...it didnt look like that for everyone tho...we had a CHOICE OF SKINS FOR THAT!!...lol
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Post by Viral »

drunken jesus wrote:
Tha Kulprit wrote:*cancels all lyrics about frank grimes aka grimey*
i forgot all about this till now

but


behold


"typeo"


http://www.ezforum.org/freestyle/freest ... ut404.html

lol i checked dat shit out again..and it was some like singles shit HAAAA
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Post by Brah-Vo »

I know lol. I think they lost the domain.
But dont get me wrong.
Frank Grimes was some dope ish.
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they should probably include pokemon references too..
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