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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:44 pm
by Lawgix
it'd be a sight to see grammas eyes
havent thought of prayin since gramma died
i know when she cries it rains
i got no choice but to defy tha pain
dont know how i could put coke before Christ
blew a line and begged to be forgiven tha same night
im not religious far from a holy man
i can picture Christ with spikes through tha palms and "holy" hands
that was a tight drop man flat out... really felt it n whats even stranger is when i was readin this a commercial about God came on weird what a coincidence lol PEACE BR0
Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:57 pm
by ~*Blitz*~
Yeah, I liked this drop alot - Its awesome to see a diffrent kind of writing from you and I wish youd drop more shit like that...Its deep and actually tells alot more when you think about the words.......dot dot dot lol anyway, good job JJ
Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:16 am
by -TraMaTiK-
yo this whole piece was nice jj...definetly felt it...nice man..props..a change from guns 2...nice -1-
Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 4:55 pm
by SlickMex
Nice drop..deep meanin..Like to see more of this..
Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 7:18 am
by *.HarleQuin.*
i liked the whole concept , and i could feel the emotion a little bit
but i also think u could have worded this a little better for easier comprehension and to add a little complexity and depth to what ur saying, other than that keep em comin = )
Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 12:48 pm
by precise
yea it was very straight forward, i think it was aright. the concepts were all kinda played to be honest but its not a problem, decent for a distilled drop lol good shit bro
Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 7:13 pm
by drunken jesus
probably god loves ugly
Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 9:07 pm
by Lawgix
btw... wb DJ
Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 5:55 pm
by MesaR
yea it was good.
Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 5:15 am
by Spoof
dont know how i could put coke before Christ
blew a line and begged to be forgiven tha same night
im not religious far from a holy man
i can picture Christ with spikes through tha palms and "holy" hands
^^^^ my fav piece of it
nice poem dawg, I was feeling it, keep dropping!