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Better Watch it, This Chick is Blitzin

On the net its ~*Blitz*~, The femcee that constantly stays flowing elite
But my real name is Sam, Also know as "Mrs. Quick to slice ya throat" on the street/

It'd be insane to think I couldn't smoke you, I turn the whole site on by dressing lacey
So don't act like your 3 inch dicks and whack ass raps could ever intimidate me/

ThreeSam's are the queen bees on this site, You guys are just our precious workers
We're so fucken fly we're blowing circuits with our lyrical surges on the surface/

This shit is our profession, we're just here to teach you bitches a lesson
You better fucken respect it, Or we'll destroy you fucking prepubescent freshman/

You guys are stupid if you think your club jams could make us dance
But if you put us on the same beat, First thing you'll see is a bulge in all your pants/

I'm vivid, Me spittin is like just giving birth, It'll be leaving you pussies in stitches
My metaphysical physics and complex diction makes metaphorical sickness/

I'm inventive and witty, The rest of y'all are just pathetic and shitty
I'm a bad bitch and I'd laugh in your face if you ever thought you could pimp me/

Diss me and get fucked in ya pee hole, I'll stab knives thru ya peep hole,
Its a mathematical fact a 1/3 of the Sam's is better then any of you zero's/

You think you faggots can win a few battles and then come and pick our brains
We're the hottest battlers on the scene and we'll wreck you all with no trace of your remains/

So I suggest you think again if you wanna test me, Just remember I'm real when I spit
I'll rip outcha colon and throw it at you, So at least someone is feelin your shit/

Changed Names But When She Raps, its Still a Fiasco

reppin me? this'll be the easiest verse ill ever do
harleQuin's the chick all these other bitches look to//

wanna test me, cool but u better come correct boo
yeah ive been beaten but trust thats only a select few//

threesam,ill rappers who sit down to piss out our ureathras
rippin lames,demandin our respect, u can call us the +Arethas+//

its gonna take more than some played out fem jokes to defeat us
publicy transportin dicks to theyre graves call us the elite bus//

talk all the shit u want,i know u stay beatin ur dick to my myspace
mad cus my mouth is only used to rhyme sick,yet still in love with my face//

my bitchy ways got u wishin to tame me, please ill spit u up like my +bi-race+

im cocky n hell yeah im confident, excutin my law, call me the president
came to stay in this game ,respect? aint payin shit so im the most hated resident//

get in ya skin, and u eat ya brains out but dont think u hostin this parasite
i dont feel no remorse about rippin u so sit back and watch me tear this site//

dont like what im saying, someone please stop me, til then watch me bear this right
care? not quite, got my bitches to share this fight, got u thinkin damn she tight//

blind ya site, ur eyes wont suffice when i continue to glare this light
got u scared at night, havin nightmares about the day u joined this fight//

u flyin high, well im about to delay ya flight, ruthless bitch..never been known to bite
u already know who i am, i get more hype then when ppl thought ciara was a hermaphodite//

-aretha frankiln's song respect
-im puerto rican and white


Lady of Beauty yes, But Her Lyrics Will Make U Feel So Ugly
my name alone is enough to steal ur man
u can see what i got jus from the palm of my hand (palm reading/fortune)

ill make u bow down like the bitch that u r
dnt mess with me fool u wont get very far

im a fucking treasure, x marks the spot
us sams r fucking queens,u wana see us drop-it-like-its-hot

threesam, equals triple pain, triple the beef u gain, and triple the blood we slain,
yeah were chicks without dicks, packin hips tits n lips,

u can go on and hate, coz i much appreciate
it goes to show me how much u wana hit-this-mate

im fucking heaven on earth,everyone wants a taste of me
dnt bother waiting in line tho jus like heaven i dnt come for free

my intelligence is jus like my looks
im the girl who will leave u stunned and shook
dnt forget to book, ima busy woman u might not even get a look

threesam, thats like sex on legs
too bad the closest ull get is an IL profile, even if u beg

dream of me moaning ur name in bed
oops i forgot what was ur name, jack or ted?

sadly this needs to come to an end
jus like ur rap career wen u mess with these threeheads

http://illestlyrics.com/board/post23845.html#23845

Blitz tore this collab down. I thought she had one of the best verses of the week.

Sam came pretty dope. A few parts fell off.

Ladysam, not to bad, keep working on it.

Overall the collab was solid. It made you all come off as really tough. Which is good. Its all about your image. You don't want to seem weak.

Lil kim like lyrics with all the sexuality. Which usually works.

Overall though. I'm quite impressed. I didn't need to force my way through it. It came off pretty smooth. Nothing seemed to out of place.

Just keep refining your skills. All of you need to work on smoother multis. It seems you get the idea. You just need to apply it better.

You might want to try using some more complex wordplay.
Like its funny to say "the guys are beating off to my myspace" but if you made that a little more complex. It might grab our attention more. Maybe if you set it up with a punchline.

"get in ya skin, and u eat ya brains out but dont think u hostin this parasite
i dont feel no remorse about rippin u so sit back and watch me tear this site//

dont like what im saying, someone please stop me, til then watch me bear this right
care? not quite, got my bitches to share this fight, got u thinkin damn she tight// "

THAT WAS SICK ^ :]

8.8/10. Good job everyone involved. Can't wait to see more of this.

"

LoL What Can i Say?
This Was Pretty ill. i Was Readin Blitz's Verse Like 'Lol Damn This is Gnna Be Hard 2 Follow' But Yah The 3 Of u Ripped it Lol.
Blitz's Verse... i Enjoyed This The Most, ur Creative in a Different Kinda Way From Anyone On This Site id Say..
But my real name is Sam, Also know as "Mrs. Quick to slice ya throat" on the street/ <--Word Lmao
So I suggest you think again if you wanna test me, Just remember I'm real when I spit
I'll rip outcha colon and throw it at you, So at least someone is feelin your shit/ <--ill Closer
Deffo The Best Written i Seen From u Doreen Lol Killer Punches, Multis n Flow. Keep at it

HarleQuin..
get in ya skin, and u eat ya brains out but dont think u hostin this parasite
i dont feel no remorse about rippin u so sit back and watch me tear this site// <--This Bar Was Hot as Fuck Lol. u Have a Good Grip Of Multis Now And Usin Complicated Words is Also Somethin u Should Keep Doin Lol. Vocab n Shit. Punches Were On Point n it Flowed Nice as Hell Apart From Maybe 1 Bar, Lol So Dont Quit ur Elevatin a Lot.

LadySam.. You've Also Elevated a Lot in The Month Or So u Been Here. And Thats Good 2 See Since i Known u For Quite a Bit And u Wouldnt Think at All You'd Be Dropping Writtens And Battles So Props On That. u Still Have Very Unique Punches as i Said Before On Other Writtens And Battles But Try Extending Vocab, Mettas n Multis. Overall ur Verse Was Hot Tho And Keep Up The Good Work. ur Gettin Better Fast, And This is The Best Place 2 Do it Haha.

threesam, thats like sex on legs
too bad the closest ull get is an IL profile, even if u beg

dream of me moaning ur name in bed
oops i forgot what was ur name, jack or ted? <--Lolo Funny Shit.

Overall This Was a Real Good Collabo So Do More!!! Lol And Keep Up The Good Work, Peace

this was a dope drop, oddly enough to order of how good yall were is the same order you dropped in....funky, but here we go...

Blitz -

On the net its ~*Blitz*~, The femcee that constantly stays flowing elite
But my real name is Sam, Also know as "Mrs. Quick to slice ya throat" on the street/
^^^lmao strong bar...

I'm vivid, Me spittin is like just giving birth, It'll be leaving you pussies in stitches
My metaphysical physics and complex diction makes metaphorical sickness/
^^^complex vocab, and good rhyme scheme, dope

Diss me and get fucked in ya pee hole, I'll stab knives thru ya peep hole,
Its a mathematical fact a 1/3 of the Sam's is better then any of you zero's/
^^creative spin, but the first line made me cringe, lol

HQ -

its gonna take more than some played out fem jokes to defeat us
publicy transportin dicks to theyre graves call us the elite bus//
^^creative and original

talk all the shit u want,i know u stay beatin ur dick to my myspace
mad cus my mouth is only used to rhyme sick,yet still in love with my face//
^^first line was dope as hell, fell off a bit on the second line but still hot

get in ya skin, and u eat ya brains out but dont think u hostin this parasite
i dont feel no remorse about rippin u so sit back and watch me tear this site//
^^also mad creative

LadySam -

my name alone is enough to steal ur man
u can see what i got jus from the palm of my hand
^^decent...

i really cant quote nething else i felt these lines were newbish, and just need some experience..

overall good shit tho yall, a good good read..

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Great feedback. All dead on. Uppin

blitz tore it up... good drop from all of ya but good GOD blitz just ripped this shit...

This shit is our profession, we're just here to teach you bitches a lesson
You better fucken respect it, Or we'll destroy you fucking prepubescent freshman/

I'm vivid, Me spittin is like just giving birth, It'll be leaving you pussies in stitches
My metaphysical physics and complex diction makes metaphorical sickness/

I'm inventive and witty, The rest of y'all are just pathetic and shitty
I'm a bad bitch and I'd laugh in your face if you ever thought you could pimp me/

str8 fuckin fire

threesam,ill rappers who sit down to piss out our ureathras
rippin lames,demandin our respect, u can call us the +Arethas+//

its gonna take more than some played out fem jokes to defeat us
publicy transportin dicks to theyre graves call us the elite bus//

talk all the shit u want,i know u stay beatin ur dick to my myspace
mad cus my mouth is only used to rhyme sick,yet still in love with my face//

my bitchy ways got u wishin to tame me, please ill spit u up like my +bi-race+

awesome shit from you too harlequin

n last but not least

im a fucking treasure, x marks the spot
us sams r fucking queens,u wana see us drop-it-like-its-hot

threesam, equals triple pain, triple the beef u gain, and triple the blood we slain,
yeah were chicks without dicks, packin hips tits n lips,

u can go on and hate, coz i much appreciate
it goes to show me how much u wana hit-this-mate

im fucking heaven on earth,everyone wants a taste of me
dnt bother waiting in line tho jus like heaven i dnt come for free

threesam, thats like sex on legs
too bad the closest ull get is an IL profile, even if u beg

good shit form all of you

SAMMEH thats tight, shiiiiiiit gotta love a chick who can spit as good as her, damn!, fuckin show some love!


Good Job SAMMY keep up the good work

yea, blitze shocked me with this collabo

nice too see somethin from the threesams finally haha

my fav parts by blitz :


I'm vivid, Me spittin is like just giving birth, It'll be leaving you pussies in stitches
My metaphysical physics and complex diction makes metaphorical sickness/

I'm inventive and witty, The rest of y'all are just pathetic and shitty
I'm a bad bitch and I'd laugh in your face if you ever thought you could pimp me/

Diss me and get fucked in ya pee hole, I'll stab knives thru ya peep hole,
Its a mathematical fact a 1/3 of the Sam's is better then any of you zero's/

^^ DAMN lol lovin the vocaulary, the punch and the multies in these bars

my fav parts by HG:

wanna test me, cool but u better come correct boo
yeah ive been beaten but trust thats only a select few//

threesam,ill rappers who sit down to piss out our ureathras
rippin lames,demandin our respect, u can call us the +Arethas+//

get in ya skin, and u eat ya brains out but dont think u hostin this parasite
i dont feel no remorse about rippin u so sit back and watch me tear this site//
dont like what im saying, someone please stop me, til then watch me bear this right

nice nice^^^ getting good with consistent multies and concepts, and the ARETHA line was hot

fav parts by ladysam:

im fucking heaven on earth,everyone wants a taste of me
dnt bother waiting in line tho jus like heaven i dnt come for free

my intelligence is jus like my looks
im the girl who will leave u stunned and shook
dnt forget to book, ima busy woman u might not even get a look

dream of me moaning ur name in bed
oops i forgot what was ur name, jack or ted?

^^ pretty ill, gotta work more on youre rhymes but youre in the right direction, still packin nice lines tho for sure


nice drop ladys

ty donnie <3

Straight up that was some fia shyt- hurr goez-

Blitz- Tore da shit down

I'm vivid, Me spittin is like just giving birth, It'll be leaving you pussies in stitches
My metaphysical physics and complex diction makes metaphorical sickness/

That was fia as fuck, I really like your use of vocab enhances your verse very well. Rhyme scheme was well put together, Only thing i really didnt like to much was the length of your bars it kinda threw off ya flow, Overall score 9.1/10 Ya tore it up.

Fiasco- Nice flow

I liked your verse but there are a couple things about it. If you worked on your vocab and rhyme scheme you burn it up chick. A few parts threw me off for a sec. I also feel your bars were a bit to simple, youve got great potential Good job. Made me horny and discusted at the same time, Lmao. Overall- 6.8/10

lady sam- Not bad.

Again i liked your verse aswell, Just a lil 2 simple. On the other hand your bars were a lil 2 short to really catch my attention. You have some alright vocab, step it up a notch and youll be kickin it. I like yours even erything i said, It still a good verse.Overall- 6.4/10

Over all though your collab 8.7/10

Yall blew my expectations out of the water,nice from all of you, I actualy enjoyed it which is more than i can say for a couple people on here. Keep at it, yall kill it.

-Twiztid

I'm vivid, Me spittin is like just giving birth, It'll be leaving you pussies in stitches
My metaphysical physics and complex diction makes metaphorical sickness/

ILL Line...Best Out Of The Collabo

lady sam HQ and blitz you did heaps good..

I'll keep it simple, it wasn't half bad.. blitz's first bar was the best bar in this whole collab, harlequingirl had some creative and nice punchles, lady sam was ok I guess, nothing really impressed me in her verse, hopefully they keep at it and improve, rap is like a game or a sport.. and it takes longer for girls to get the hang of it lol

lol just dont try us..all this other freepostin is being deleted.

I liked it very much good lines threesome collabo like da name

blitz shined in this, the second one was solid too picked up nicely, the third one wasn't bad but it wasn't up to par with the other verses imo