Hip Hop Forum

this cats the one to give it to ya//
took ya rook wit a pawn and thats how i schooled ya//

yea thats right "word playa" i bomb u like pearl harbor//
and then peel ur wig off quick like an unlicensed barber//

this kidz definately crazy if he thinks hes got a chance//
only time he ever lifted heads was when he was watchin hiz plantz//

his asylum looks like a meat locker but your still full of insanity//
call me constantine how i turn this nigga over to christianity.

6/10 i liked the ending ... could be more complex and improve the flow a lil.. it was decent tho

Thanks, this ol dawg needs to catch up on alot of pratice.

yah it was alright, you obviously know what you are doing. Just need to get back into it. I liked the last line the best as well.

barber line was cool, overall this was pretty simplistic though

pretty much what ekoms said just try to make your shit more complex and more interesting to read