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*.HarleQuinGirl.*-Vs--=TraMaTiK=-(tramatik)

Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 11:11 am
by -TraMaTiK-
8 bars due within 3days or so no flippin or that bullshit good luck -1-

Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 3:38 pm
by -TraMaTiK-
u seem like the rich type and this bitch might get smacked quick like
damn she spit 'sick'? Ha,RIGHT..only when her mouths fulla dick at night
Harlequin?ur really 'funny and hard',especially witta name like Samantha Neverson
its tru hunny u aint a star,i know u want it but i cant stand ya,so we cant be 2gether-hun
its cool tho i wudnt wanna be with a girl who faked her first pic,id ratha take a worse chick
who bakes bodys in'a hearse quick,and who can spit sumwhat of a verse legit
i mean DAMN u keep turnin jon down,u really droppin a bomb now
since u net dated scott,n laughed at cha own dad dyin,but wheres mom now?
it dont matta cuz like Em said to Ja 'BITCH GO 2 SLEEP' cuz ya flow iz weak
and ya know u a hoe thats cheap,thats why u took rell in and gave em a 'blow so deep'
not on his dick but his heart,thats sum wack shit but definetly a classic
only in the sense that only like 4 guys on illest havent seen ya ass n 'waxed it'
u given free blows so be a free hoe cuz u outta ur 'sequence' like scotty wit his old 'free-flo'
and u?ur juz sumthin i dont need so,i cud careless if these punches make ya bleed tho
cuz u got on my last nerve and im'a have 2 'lay u on ur back' like ur sig shows
u tryna look cute BITCH U LOOK PREPPY,like sumthin outta Barney n them kid shows

-3rd line Samantha Neverson iz he real name
-5th line she supposedly faked her pic the 1st time she came online
-8th line her dad died n she laughed
-last bar in her sig she's layin on her on back..'on her back' as if she was in'a coffin...

rest shud be explainable..uppin 4 her verse

Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 6:47 pm
by *.HarleQuin.*
My last name is Sabado btw, Neverson is Trey Songz' last Name = )

[align=center]Watch Me Mince Vince ; )
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im known to bless and yes i posses the finesse of a ill seasoned writer
ur put to rest and played out like nothing less of a real beaten biter//

ugly boy im ruling ur head so much even ya pimples call me sire
time to retire like if i threw proactive on ya face, have u greasin lighter//

im about to pick apart this dude so much hes gonna call me the de-seeding fighter
wonder hows she gonna kill a dude this time, and she doesn't need fake personals to guide her//

well all know the only championship u can claim is the special Olympics ring of fire
but i aint retarded, my success is charted, scared to battle aww is it petra u squeezin tighter?//

ha real identity u'll never acquire,that love u need to retire. does she show a models pic when they card her?++
its gonna be a sad day when it turns out shes a fat bitch on top breakin ur twig ass,while u lay weezin harder//


i see many cloudy days in ya future, subdued to my physical and lyrical torture, call me ya health forecaster
i may see whats in ya future but it dont mean i wont be quick to 'quit' ya heart have u breathin faster//



a dude u sed u looked like justin, u tried to make it out like a girl was lustin, when u know ur face is a 'tramatik'disaster++
u brought sexy back? please u made everyone return it, that face couldn't mislead me if u was a deceivin master//

after this battles done if u get one vote i might have to accuse u of kissin clever ass sir
thought u could end HarleQuin? just sit back and watch win recievin ever last her//
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+his gf faked a pic of a famous super model
+some guy sed he looked like justin timberlake and
he tried to say it was girl to seem cooll[/align]

Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 7:02 pm
by SlickMex
a dude u sed u looked like justin,tried to make it out like a girl was lustin, when u know ur face is a 'tramatik'disaster++
u brought sexy back? please u made everyone return it, please that face couldn't mislead me if u was a deceivin master//
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fav lines..she had a better flow..multis..n personals..

Vote goes to.....HarleQuin....

Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 7:03 pm
by AJ
Both Were tight but have 2 give it 2 tramatik

Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 9:56 pm
by LadySam
Punches - sam
Personals - sam (hers were real)
NamePlay - sam
Flow - tramatik
Structure - sam
Mulites - tramatik
EnterTainMent - sam


if u cant do the math, my vote goes to harlinquin

i dnt no if i can vote but ill try haha
im also sick of this line which is aimed at every femcee

damn she spit 'sick'? Ha,RIGHT..only when her mouths fulla dick at night

u dnt all say the exact same words but its the same meaning, like, 'spit, no she swallows.' or 'spit? u cant get dick' or w.e get new ideas/disses boys that ones been used and abused.


u brought sexy back? please u made everyone return it, that face couldn't mislead me if u was a deceivin master//

^^ i thought this was the funniest line. lmao

i think my vote is legitimate id liek to see tramatik argue it tho

Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 10:13 pm
by MesaR
^ No Way Tramatik Came Way Harder...

I Didnt Get All Of Sams Shit...Gave me a headache..
Tramatiks verse was decent so he gets my vote...

Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 6:45 am
by Momeijah
Ok im Not So Lazy Right Now Lemme Break This Down

-=TraMaTiK=- wrote:u seem like the rich type and this bitch might get smacked quick like
damn she spit 'sick'? Ha,RIGHT..only when her mouths fulla dick at night
it Was an Ok Punch With a Bad Set Up, But its Played a LOT Especially Against Girls
Harlequin?ur really 'funny and hard',especially witta name like Samantha Neverson
its tru hunny u aint a star,i know u want it but i cant stand ya,so we cant be 2gether-hun
it's Not Really a Punch, Personal But it's Not Her Real Name Haha, Weak Bar Overall
its cool tho i wudnt wanna be with a girl who faked her first pic,id ratha take a worse chick
who bakes bodys in'a hearse quick,and who can spit sumwhat of a verse legit
Ok Now ur Gettin a Bit More Personal So Word, The Set Up isnt a Punch Tho, But Good 'Downgrading Punch' 2 Finish The Bar With, it Literally Saved The Entire Bar
i mean DAMN u keep turnin jon down,u really droppin a bomb now
since u net dated scott,n laughed at cha own dad dyin,but wheres mom now?
i Kno ur Referrin 2 Me Lmao, But The 2nd Line.. isnt a Punchline at All, ur Just Naming Personals Without a Punchline Which isnt Doing Any Favours
it dont matta cuz like Em said to Ja 'BITCH GO 2 SLEEP' cuz ya flow iz weak
and ya know u a hoe thats cheap,thats why u took rell in and gave em a 'blow so deep'
it's a Played Punch, Basically She's Cheap Cuz She Did (This)... Wasnt Feelin it
not on his dick but his heart,thats sum wack shit but definetly a classic
only in the sense that only like 4 guys on illest havent seen ya ass n 'waxed it'
it's a Good Punch Yeah, Played For Goin Against a Female Though
u given free blows so be a free hoe cuz u outta ur 'sequence' like scotty wit his old 'free-flo'
and u?ur juz sumthin i dont need so,i cud careless if these punches make ya bleed tho
Dope Set Up, ur 2nd Line Ruined it, Shoulda Used a Punch That Would Sting And Make it an ill Bar
cuz u got on my last nerve and im'a have 2 'lay u on ur back' like ur sig shows
u tryna look cute BITCH U LOOK PREPPY,like sumthin outta Barney n them kid shows
Personal And Punch, Decent Bar
-3rd line Samantha Neverson iz he real name
-5th line she supposedly faked her pic the 1st time she came online
-8th line her dad died n she laughed
-last bar in her sig she's layin on her on back..'on her back' as if she was in'a coffin...

rest shud be explainable..uppin 4 her verse

Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 6:56 am
by Momeijah
*.HarleQuinGirl.* wrote:My last name is Sabado btw, Neverson is Trey Songz' last Name = )

[align=center]Watch Me Mince Vince ; )
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im known to bless and yes i posses the finesse of a ill seasoned writer
ur put to rest and played out like nothing less of a real beaten biter//
Not a Very Effective Punch But 1st Bar's Are About Boasting Up What ur Gnna Do
ugly boy im ruling ur head so much even ya pimples call me sire
time to retire like if i threw proactive on ya face, have u greasin lighter//
it Was an Ok Set Up With a Kinda 'Eh' Punch.
im about to pick apart this dude so much hes gonna call me the de-seeding fighter
wonder hows she gonna kill a dude this time, and she doesn't need fake personals to guide her//
Good Bar For Boastin Yourself Up, Nothin Really Hard Hittin Tho
well all know the only championship u can claim is the special Olympics ring of fire
but i aint retarded, my success is charted, scared to battle aww is it petra u squeezin tighter?//
Dope Set Up And The Punch Stung
ha real identity u'll never acquire,that love u need to retire. does she show a models pic when they card her?++
its gonna be a sad day when it turns out shes a fat bitch on top breakin ur twig ass,while u lay weezin harder//
Good Punch For Dissing 2 People at Once id Say, Set Up Coulda Been a LOT Better Tho

i see many cloudy days in ya future, subdued to my physical and lyrical torture, call me ya health forecaster
i may see whats in ya future but it dont mean i wont be quick to 'quit' ya heart have u breathin faster//
Another Line Boastin Yourself Up, u Gtta Cut Down On That Shit, it Can Cost a Battle


a dude u sed u looked like justin, u tried to make it out like a girl was lustin, when u know ur face is a 'tramatik'disaster++
u brought sexy back? please u made everyone return it, that face couldn't mislead me if u was a deceivin master//
Dope Set Up And Another Stingy Punch, The Best Punch in The Battle id Say
after this battles done if u get one vote i might have to accuse u of kissin clever ass sir
thought u could end HarleQuin? just sit back and watch win recievin ever last her//
Ok Bar For Downgrading ur Opponent And Showing ur 'Dominance'.. Dont Rely On 2 Much Of These Though
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+his gf faked a pic of a famous super model
+some guy sed he looked like justin timberlake and
he tried to say it was girl to seem cooll[/align]
Ok So Here's How it Goes

Punches - Harlequin
Personals - Tied
Multis - Tramatik
Flow - Harlequin (Both Werent Really Flowin 2 Nice)
Mettas/Similies - Tramatik
Creativity - Harlequin
Entertainment - Harlequin
Structure - Tramatik

So Yah My Vote is For Harlequin. Tramatik u Need 2 Use Personals More Wisely, Dont Just Say a Personal Like 'u Did This'.. Make a Punch Out Of it Cuz it Makes a Shitload Of Difference. Use ur imagination!!! Lol. Harlequin, Use More Multis And Watch ur Bar Length, And Have Less Lines About Yourself When They Could Be Used For Getting u More Votes. Good Battle Overall Though.

Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 7:44 am
by -TraMaTiK-
uppin 3-2 her

Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 10:50 am
by RH1NO
Punches - hg
Personals - tie
Multies-tramatik
Flow - tramatik
Structure -hg
EnterTainMent - tramatik
vote = tramatik

Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 11:04 am
by -TraMaTiK-
koo koo 3-3..uppin

Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 2:45 pm
by 16 Micz
ok well its up to tramatik to count lady sams or dominos vote...cause i personally think its a bullshit vote..a friendship will always sway someones vote..and idc who says it doesnt...but

punches:hq
personals:tramatik
entertainment:tramatik
creativity:tramatik
flow/structure:lol tramatik
vocab:hq
multis:hq
Sims/metas:hq
overall:tramatik

well ill have to give my vote to tramatik...his personal punches really helped him out..when u can use personals and punches in one bar its always a strong point in a battle...good battle both of you...i know the cats were even but at the end tramatik still came out on top..

Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 3:24 pm
by -TraMaTiK-
idk bout them..i mean no hate but r they in her crew or no?cuz if they aint then its legit..i kno ladysam iz..but idk shrugs...4-3 uppin

Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 4:40 pm
by *.HarleQuin.*
dont remember u saying anything about crew votes, and everybody needs to stop bitching so damn much every fuckin battle my god..its 4-3 uppin