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Improvise aint his rap name it's wat he trys to do..
Key word being try cuz he dont kno wat he got into..
Why come at a Mexican with out the feds..
Imma leave u like the border patrol,dead..
For all u kno im part of the drug cartel..
Hit u hard n quick like im in the nfl..
So give your farewell..to all your family n friends..
Cuz like this diss this is were your life ends..

Trapped in my labyrinth with no hopes of escape
Running in circles, stuck inside a figure eight

Too intricate to imitate my styles unique
Innovate yet it's the same every time you speak

Poorly developed, simply put ya rhymes are weak
Went to a great expense yet you still sounds cheap

Relentless attempts ta infiltrate my defenses
When conflict commences, it's warfare in the trenches

Close quarters combat, renders ya weapon useless
Full contact, leave ya body covered in bruises

Specialized techniques an secret fighting stances
Cobra, Tiger Claw, Iron Paw or Praying Mantis

Anybody gonna vote??

Ok This Battle Didnt Really impress Me. Both Came Pretty Weak. Slickmex Had Some Good Shit in His But Kinda Ruined Some Punches By Not Makin it Flow Nice With The Opener. Try 2 Reword ur Shit Next Time u Battle So its Flowin And Slips Off The Tongue. improvise Had Some Ok Punches, Multis in Some Places And Pretty Good Creatvity. Both Could Be improved a Lot, Especially On Flow. But My Vote's Goin 2 improvise.

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uuhh pretty much what domino said..my votes for improvise, slickmex came too basic and simple and boring..

Damn imma bout to get skunked..haha..thanx for the vote..

yeah..slickmex yours didnt flow punches were nice but they gotta flow to make em hit improsive you had some multies and ok punches your hit harder caused it flowed and gave a extra leg to ur verse so vote - improvise

Done got skunked..haha..Congrats..

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