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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 8:33 am
by ~*Blitz*~
i was feeling it, nice drop...keep em coming
Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 6:16 am
by -TraMaTiK-
one of ur more 'i know weapons' kinda pieces lol..but its koo..im not really into talkin about em unless im makin reference if im gonna 'shoot u blah blah' in'a battle but its not bad..koo shit -1-
Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 6:32 am
by Batman
guns are my hobby too so i liked it. nice structure and metaphors were ok. nice closer!
keep it up
Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 6:43 am
by MesaR
yeah one of your better gun drops i also liked your closer keep it up fam getting better