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This is Just About What its Like Being Smart But a Fucking Troublemaker at The Same Time Haha. And Not Wanting Told What 2 Learn And Basically, How im a Success Now, That Can Also Rap Lool. Tried a New Style at The Start, it's Not Perfect But im Lookin into Writin More Shit in That Style.

Started Readin Novels at an Early-Age ..||
No Matter-The-Concept ..||
They Barely Out The Maternity-Stage ..||
im Lappin-With-Progress ..||
When i Started School, i Was Eager-To-Learn ..||
But My Behaviour Stopped-Me ..||
My Brain Worked But i Had Trouble Keepin-in-Turn ..||
Like My Blood Was Just Coffee ..||
Was Always Looking To Take-a-Fast-Win ..||
Reachin Out-From-The-Others ..||
All The Kids Could Barely Make-it-Past-Ten ..||
i Was Countin-in-Hundreds ..||
a Teacher's Dream, But a Nightmare-Too ..||
Picture a Brainy Bart Simpson ..||
Wits Left Em Chokin Like a Tightened-Noose ..||
There Response-Was-Detention ..||
i Spent My Life Droppin-Contenders, With Relative-Ease ..||
Crooked Principals, Out 2 Break Me Cuz Theyll Never-Be-Me ..||
i Was Never interested in Being Told-What-To-Study ..||
Only Thing That Fed My Mind Was My Flows-Watch-Em-Running ..||
School Never Had a Rap-Class, So Fuck-Attending ..||
Uhh Gym? Science, Math-Class? Shit, Nothin-Tempts-Me ..||
Spent My Last Years Skippin-it, Picturing Livin as a Lyricist ..||
Soon it Became a Hobby, Once a Dream But i Ain't Killin-it ..||
Whatever Happens Happens, But i Ain't Riskin-My-Chances ..||
im Makin Money Off Everything, And My Scrips-Are-Advancing ..||



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shits dope as fuck man, i liked the first half a lot, the style was ill bro, and the endin was tight as well not as good as the beginnin, shoulda kept wit the same style i thought, but it was kool to see a switch of styles, i would highlight my fav part but it was the whole beginnin wit the diff style

Only Thing That Fed My Mind Was My Flows-Watch-Em-Running ..||
School Never Had a Rap-Class, So Fuck-Attending ..||

my fav bar
dnt ask me y i wont no
lmao
shit was sweet!
<3

this was a good drop Dom... i was really feelin this line...

School Never Had a Rap-Class, So Fuck-Attending ..||
Uhh Gym? Science, Math-Class? Shit, Nothin-Tempts-Me ..||
Spent My Last Years Skippin-it, Picturing Livin as a Lyricist ..||
Soon it Became a Hobby, Once a Dream But i Ain't Killin-it ..||
Whatever Happens Happens, But i Ain't Riskin-My-Chances ..||
im Makin Money Off Everything, And My Scrips-Are-Advancing ..||

good job man keep em comin br0!!!!

cool rhyme scheme could have been a little more lucid, good though man, i see some elevation

good drop man, i see you tried an " A B A B" structure in the beginning, it was cool

i Spent My Life Droppin-Contenders, With Relative-Ease ..||
Crooked Principals, Out 2 Break Me Cuz Theyll Never-Be-Me ..||

^^^ fav bar

good shit bro

Hell yeah that was tight.. the style switchin' was kool too.. I liked it a lot.

Yo I like da spit school neva had a rap class so fuck attending yea u right dey didnt