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Wrote this with a Quickness
Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 10:24 am
by ~*Blitz*~
You play with my emotions like its some kinda game,
Your words set me on fire and then extinguish the flame/
It wont be much longer until I reach the end of my rope,
Then take a dive face down losing all hope/
As I sit here and pour my heart out to this note pad,
I cant help but feeling like you don't realize what you coulda had/
I woulda gave you the whole world and treated you like a king,
Don't tell me you got feelings for me when I was just another fling/
Constantly preaching to me that you're one a kind,
But with all the bullshit and lies you aint any different from any other guy/
My heart bleeds for the need to get this off my chest,
I'm feelin stressed and depressed but I got one last request/
When the thought of me crosses your mind,
Don't regret what you left behind/
Comment my shit you fuckers! =) Input on my writings are always appreciated!!
Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 10:50 am
by Lawgix
i like this no wonder ur a rhyme master haha newayz great shit to a not-so-great subject... but i'd give it a 7.5 outta 10! good goin i'd like to hear it on audio... maybe we'll lay it down when i get there who knows haha newayz good drop hun!!! peace!!
Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 2:29 pm
by Stina
well i can tell someone was pissed when writin this. haha those stupid men. i personally liked it, i can relate an how you wrote it was good.
"
Your words set me on fire and then extinguish the flame/"
best part in my opinion :]
<3
Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 3:47 pm
by MesaR
eh, i didnt feel this Drop At all to be honest...
I Only Liked Your First Bar..
Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:01 pm
by Lawgix
HOW do women know these things? GOD
Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 11:46 am
by precise
Lawgix wrote:HOW do women know these things? GOD
^^^^ its that sixth sense they have, kinda like how they automaticly know everytime you check out there ass
good drop blitze, keep at it n keep gettin your practice in
Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 4:07 am
by ~*Blitz*~
Thank all you awesome people for the feed...much appreciated...
Uppin for more feed COME ONE YOU LAZY PPL lol
Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 7:06 am
by LadySam
blitzzzzzz blitz blitzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
this shit was goood and yes like stina we can alll relate to it coz men r asshole and they can eat my ass plz and ty!
but no i loved this it was full of real emotions u culd tell it came from the heart
SAM ilu!
Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 7:17 am
by ~*Blitz*~
HAHA ILU MORE!! <333 yeaaaa it did come from the heart and my emotions are jumping out of it...men do fucken suck i swear all there good for is making us cry and want to kill them lol....they can kiss my ass to =)
Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 10:26 am
by precise
~*Blitz*~ wrote:men do fucken suck i swear all there good for is making us cry and want to kill them lol....they can kiss my ass to =)
pfffffffffffffffffffffff hahaha, i dont agree with the first part cause i dont make women cry, but yes im EXCELLENT at the second part, im a MASTER of gettin women to want to kick my ass, no why?? cause its kinky n im tha fuckin CHAMP, lol shit precise is sleepy
Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 8:43 pm
by *.HarleQuin.*
blitz this was good..i know where ur coming from and why do the SAMS have a secret ILU<<<and me not know about it = ( ...
Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 10:19 pm
by LadySam
=O sam doesnt no about our secret ILU!!!!!!
you do nowwwwwww
sam ILU the mostesttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!
<3
Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 7:15 am
by -TraMaTiK-
As I sit here and pour my heart out to this note pad,
I cant help but feeling like you don't realize what you coulda had/
word^^^...i liked that part the best 2 be honest..overall it had its nice lines and it was heart felt..nice job Sammy..keep it up...-1-
Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 10:15 am
by ~*Blitz*~
haha ty vince!! <3
SAM'S ILU THE MOSTESTESTEST!!!
Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 1:17 pm
by precise
THE.FeMaLE.FiaSCO wrote:blitz this was good..i know where ur coming from and why do the SAMS have a secret ILU<<<and me not know about it = ( ...
^^^^ cause your the only threesam who hasnt left voicemail on my myspace, so you officially dont count!!!