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JJ vs Symbolikull
Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 8:30 am
by ~Symbolikull~
8-12 Bars
First to 5 Votes
3-0 KO
48hrs DeadLine
He spits first
Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 8:03 am
by ~Symbolikull~
forgot about this battle, so i keyed somethin up...
This dumb fucks Ona Mission, to die thru a Contridiction?
Bitch im the one who killed your brother and Shot the Witness!!!,//
So I'll Punctuate, to kill this faggot I don't need to bring 2 Guns to Play,
But kid I don't hate you, your Mother and Father are the Ones I Hate,//
I spit razor blades to Sever Thru, yuh heart when you leave this site aint none gonna Remember You,
I Let my Letters Do, the damage, So Pop Shit, Talk Shit bout shootin guns but I bet your punk ass Never Do//
My Microphone Will make yuh Spine Explode Till you know your lines Rhyme to Show Skill,
Im Lyin, my Flows Ill, thru my written Ima leave this Ho Peeled back when I steal Both Steels,//
He Claims hes Holdin, but hes holdin 2 Pellet Pistols Don,
Here Ill give you some help Ill Sell It Wit Chu - Juan,
When you spit it sounds like when Sarah Michelle Gellar Whistles On,
I would frame you but I have no Shelves to Stick You On//
structures off but oh well
Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 3:01 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
wow recycled and re-used rhymes, guns and gangsta shit....lol
nice shit though i guess
Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 3:18 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
understood!!! UppiN 4 Votes
Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 5:14 pm
by Lawgix
hmmm theoneyouhate u oughta answer my call out...
Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 2:31 pm
by Lawgix
aight thats cool i'll work on my verse for it 2nite... but let me vote on this real quick
okay JJ...
drop the gun talkin man... its stupid and it don't win battles... u should know u lost 8 times doin that shit... n only won 2 battles
Symbolikull...
ur verse was tight lyric wise n multie wise... yeah structure was rather off but eh u always make up for it lol... some of the lines ran on too long... but its okay cause i do that too...
over all i'ma say this vote goes to Symbolikull...
but honestly JJ the gun talk doesn't work... u need to work on a lot of things really... wordplays a major one... u have an okay point of view with punches but u need to make em harder... i'll show u in our battle... but flat out dude... work on ya shit...
Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 6:40 pm
by MesaR
yeah i basically agree with lawgix wasnt bad JJ keep it up fam ghost you stayed on topic well so u get my vote..
Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 6:42 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
2-0 thanx and UppiN
Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 6:52 pm
by ~*Blitz*~
This was a good battle from both of you...good job!
I think ghost was more creative and hit harder. He stayed with it and my vote goes to him
JJ your shit was hawt though i just think ghost came a lil bit harder with his bars and content.
If you need me to go into further detail let me know
Vote - ghost
Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 6:54 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
3-0 thanx for votin
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