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6-8 Bars House Rules Due in 48 Hours Unless u Have a Drastic Setback. Check

Check. Spit whenever man.

Aright i Just Got Up ill Be Spittin Soon

Still Got a Bit Of Writer's Block, Aright Let's Go...

i'll Ravage-ur-Limbs ur So Wack i Think This Battle's-a-Sin ..||
Saying u Have Skill is Like Saying Ladie Hazard-is-Slim ..||
ur Chances-Are-Slim u Might as Well Just Hand-Me-The-Win ..||
i'll Snap ur Neck So ur Cap is Facing Me Not With The Back-But-The-Brim ..||
This Queer Likes Em 'Long n Hard' Well, Do u <--- Like-These-Here? ..||
Fred Durst And Jack Osbourne Had a Kid For Nineteen-Years??? ..||
Damn, His Time On illest He's Been Abused More Than a Cop-Car ..||
u Could Serve 1000 Bloody Mary's And Still Wouldn't Have a 'Hot-Bar' ..||
Gettin The Horn Over 'Slim Anus' Thinkin 'i Wnna Be-Like-You' ..||
The Sad Thing is u Dress Like a Clown in Real-Life-Too ..||
Makin Some Thread Sayin ur Back Like We-Like-You ..||
i Think u Should Make a U-Turn, Shit i Tried 2 Be-Nice-Dude ..||

Explanations - Well, His Old Avatar Was iCP, 'Slim Anus' is 1 Of Their Songs So i Made a Double Meanin implyin He Likes Slim Anuses 2. Lool

Ok Just So i Dont Need 2 Edit The Post 2 Put These Explanations in. The 4th Line Means id Snap His Neck Around So Fast That His Cap Faces The Front. And The Line With The Arrow Means My Bars Are Long n Hard

Yo ill drop soon, if i go over time limit, itz aight in the origianal rules i specified no limit, but it should be soon.

No Problem

i spit quick linez- intertwined- into murderous rhymez
battlin me youll-find i sneak up behind with intent to jumble ya mind

Metaz with weak vocabulary like lungz wit no capillariez
not cemetary, ya wordz cant bury, what ya expect still gotta rap cherry

Lyrical virgin, usless vermin, like a no tool surgeon
waitin on me to drop got ya at nervez end

i rock air force onez wit da matchin fitted hat, chain straight from tha foundriez
Think about that , fresh ass nigga or da one pullin off no bounderiez (Wal-mart brand, cheap knock off)

Ill admit you tried ya best, but shit i knocked it out tha park,
bring up ya bullet proof vest, duck n run like a snitch afta dark

Twiztid on a mission, stop n listen, slit ya throat while ya pissin, left with blood drenchin
sick of this intervention, oh did i mention, should give tha stains i left on ya bitch some attention



Prolly weak i no, dont feel like spendin forever on it

Good Shit Man, Votes Ppl

"Prolly weak i no, dont feel like spendin forever on it"

You should know when you write a weak verse.

I mean some times its hard to distinguish because of bias
towards yourself. Though in the end you know if the verse
was weak or not.

Hence : Domino: Vote

i rock air force onez wit da matchin fitted hat, chain straight from tha foundriez
Think about that , fresh ass nigga or da one pullin off no bounderiez (Wal-mart brand, cheap knock off)


I still think that was fia, lol

I'm a have to pass this win to Domino, his punches are harder and his slow was better than twistid. Good job to both though.

u came hard in this line only: as u stated up top

i rock air force onez wit da matchin fitted hat, chain straight from tha foundriez
Think about that , fresh ass nigga or da one pullin off no bounderiez (Wal-mart brand, cheap knock off)

domino:

i liked ur whole concept about the slim n icp thing it was hot this got him i think

i'll Ravage-ur-Limbs ur So Wack i Think This Battle's-a-Sin ..||
Saying u Have Skill is Like Saying Ladie Hazard-is-Slim ..||
ur Chances-Are-Slim u Might as Well Just Hand-Me-The-Win ..||
i'll Snap ur Neck So ur Cap is Facing Me Not With The Back-But-The-Brim ..||

vote goes to domino... nice try tho twiztid keep workin at it... u'll get ya grove back...

domino took all categories

vote-domino

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