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Well Most Of The Words u Linked Weren't Multis, The Wordplay Was Unneccesary.. Eg

tha tannin bed is tha only way "ya-tan-bitch" <--Wtf?

its kinda sick tha way im droppin "prod-i-jies"(prodogies) <<-- Again Wtf?

Mettas Were Played as Usual, No Depth, u Had Some Multis, if it Was a Diss..... (Which it Obv Was)... at Least Make it Better Than The Ppl ur Dissing. And i Kno Why u Hate This Site. u Think Every1 'Dickrides' Cuz u Lose All The Time... Dude... its Not Dickridin, u Just Suck

lol i skimed through to see if my name was in there..since its not, have a great day, and no ones banning u...i doubt it.

hahahahaha kid... u keep droppin my name in ur whack fuckin verse n i'll give u somethin to bitch about faggot... hahahahahaha

This Verse Was Wack as Fuck ..
i Would except This From Samurai .. No Diss ..
i Know U Coulda Came Way Harder ..
Esp. When U Dissed Everybody That is Way Better Than U ..
& ya Wordplay ??..
Sucked Oprah`s ass ..
U Should Never attempt That again ..
Seriously ..
ya Multies Was Doo-Doo ..
Tha Whole Damn Diss Was Trash ..

ha!

lol, aright bro youre linking words that shouldnt be linked (why the fuck are there so many people who do that)

i think the stuff domino was thinking was wordplay was only taken apart to show the multies (which werent multies really) but when your rhyming words ya dont gotta disect them like that it confuses people

i claimed i was hood?
man im not fake liek ur bitch ass

i'm bored so i'll break down why this sucks instead of just telling you it sucks

dick is tha only time you bitches and faggots are "eatin-beef"
-eating beef isn't an expression thats used, and human dick isn't beef so, horrible

ill curb any of you its a shame tha way im "beatin-teeth"
-beating teeth? forced multi, try again

Domino you're bitch made how can you claim "precise-made-you"
- using the same word twice makes it lose purpose and effectiveness, and this wasn't a good line to begin with

ya givin me multiple reasons to "start-to-hate-you"
- why'd you dash this? it doesn't rhyme with precise made you, hate you and made you are the only words that rhyme

Fiasco bitch how can ya claim you're "his-pan-ic"
- why'd you dash this... doesn't make any sense

tha tannin bed is tha only way "ya-tan-bitch"
- tannin bed is the only way your tan? horrible wordplay, and tan bitch are the only words that rhyme with the above line

now that i ripped "spic-and-span"
-attempt at wordplay? i dunno, this concept needs alot more work

everyone knows my rhmes are "hittin-fam"
-everyone? really? i don't think so

~Symbolikull~ was GHO$T switched his name and got "named-a-host"
-named a host? wtf learn how to write multis

now im givin you reasons to be tha one "you-hate-tha-most"
-alright i guess,real simple play on your name

LadySam how ya gonna be hood from "Australia-man"?
- ladysam doesn't act like shes hood so this line is irrelevant

another third world country ya family poor like "somalias-clans"
-australia's not a 3rd world country, and only the last syllable of somalia rhymes with australia

watch out for this wannabe eminem his name is "Lawgix"
-simple, decent for what it is

next thing ya know he's gonna be claimin 313 and all tha projects
- he lives in idaho or some weird place like that i believe

please tell me whats so logical about tha name "Lawgix"
-rhyming lawgix with projects, and again with lawgix? reallll talent there kiddo

only time this kid hurts is when he's eatin pork chops and breakin "chop-sticks"
-doesn't make a goddamn bit of sense even chinks don't eat pork chops with chop sticks

im sorry to say it but when i hear tha name "kurse-it-hurts"
- umm.... when you hear his name it hurts you? are you his secret admirer or something, sounds stalkerish

play your tracks backwards and they are "reversed-with-dirt"
-reversed with dirt? QUIT FORCING MULTIS, this doens't make any sense at all

he wants to be a rapper but he's poor and "claims-to-work"
-real simple and pointless filler

give this faggot another "name-to-jerk"
- simple filler

im not worried about a bitch named "Whit-ney"
- simple set-up, no creativity

go ahead and claim you "hit-me" because ill rupture your spleen while i split your "kid-knees"
-kid knees? HORRIBLE wordplay doesn't make no sense at all

Mac i'll keep this plain and simple all i know is "your-dirty"
- simplistic diss, pointless filler

now go kill yourself i know you "heard-me"
- learn what multis are, dirty and heard me rhyme "your" doesn't need to be dashed in the above line

never met a dood from tha country side that "claims-he's-hood"
- i don't think mac claims hes hood, regardless weak filler line

everything about you is garbage not even your "name-is-good"
-eh... alright line i guess

its kinda sick tha way im droppin "prod-i-jies"(prodogies)
-horrible attempt at wordplay, and calling somebody a prodigy is a compliment

but i gotta fracture your skulls to give "luh-bot-uh-mees"(lobotomies)
-wtf are you doing? seperating words into how you pronounce them isn't wordplay

it's a shame i dont wanna be a part of tha "illest-family"
-really? nobody cares kid

make sure you faggots spell my name right when you "dare-to-ban-me"
- ban me and family rhyme thats it, quit putting dashes in shit that doesn't rhyme




you need some major work kid, go read up in my temple of wisdom and practice alot your multis are either forced or not multis at all, don't use dashes on shit that doesn't rhyme it makes you look stupid

OOOOOHHHHHHHHH DAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN

lol DJ ya need a hobby, but goodcall

ty JJ u did a good job
now were SURE ur a fucking arse
no more guessing
wankerrrrr

Enough Said.. All Killah Summed It Up, It's Over, He's Wack, Who Cares, Eat A dick, Die Slow, K?

short sweet n to the point

PrecisE wrote:OOOOOHHHHHHHHH DAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN

lol DJ ya need a hobby, but goodcall

when fucking exotic dimes and making music gets boring i'll consider getting a hobby

so i guess what ya did in this thread falls under the "fucking exotic dimes" category?

nah making music, i was waiting on a sample to finish filtering while i was typing a reply so try again kip dynamite