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Feelin the Lifes Struggles

Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 5:19 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
Its Fo Sho everyday i wake up, life keeps beatin me Down More,
like every minute spent awake the more and more i float Down Shore,//
Never I Gain, its like Forever wit Pain till it turns vague to Sever my Brain,
Shreds Up my Veins, Tensed Up my Frame, to teach me a Lesson in Shame,//
I feel the Blessin to Rap, So many Questions to Ask, is there such thing as Depth thru a Flask,
I lift my Head up to Grasp, the facts that Bend and ReFract, light till Im Pent up and Mad,//
That I Lost my Father, when i was 2 hence the emotion of the feelin of why Even Bother,
Since i was born ive been a Dyin Toddler, growin Wiser but Odder, Every Rhyme gets Hotter,//
But So What, i cant see my future or me in it like my eyes were glewed or Sewn Shut,
A temper itchin to bust till it just Blows Up, puts me ina different realm, so do i Load Up,//
And put an End to this Misery, prolly not im destined in my mind to End witta History,
Every page Read is a Mystery, the only led i pack is a pencil that Stencils the Gift Given to Me,//
But i cant help the feelin of My Savior, and Doin everyone a Favor and Insert a Razor,
Into my wrist, im pist and Fulla Rage & Anger, enuff to Killa Stranger, FulFill the Way to Enurt the Danger,//
A Mess up A Failure, UnRaised ghetto from a Trailor, minds left vacant out to sea wit the Sailors,
And Soldiers whos only contact is thru Letters and Emailers, Havin acid flashbacks Tracers and Trailers,//
I got 2 Wrists to Cut, but im to stubborn to Ever jus Give it Up, so Ill jus mosey on and Live It Up,
Its RidicuLous, how jussa Jist of Thug has me seen so Conspicuous, so for these fucks Ill Use my Dick to Bust,//

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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 5:47 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
Uppin for Feed!!!

Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 8:59 pm
by MesaR
Nice man It Was Pritty Straight I Liked Your Shit In The Middle The Most Good Work..

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 4:07 am
by ~Symbolikull~
thanx man appreciate it

Uppin for Feed

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 1:21 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
thanx man, appreciate the feed. i dont really know how much more my vocab can expand i have a pretty high vocab, but i guess theres always room for improvement, again thanx on the feed back.

bigs ups to you 2 for leavin feed

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